Not me reading this at 1am 💀

While I do think purpose is important, half of this chapter at most of the previous chapter have been repeating the same things: Sabrina and Melvin’s family

The gates*

This is like saying: he is rich due to his money. Maybe mentioning the business procured from academies or some specialization may be more fitting.

Barely*

He lacked points

Is this a pun? 👀

After gold coins, “mana stones” are…

I would use dashes here. -well you will fail anyway-…

This guy gotta chill out, when growing up gender is not a focus. Love the realist racism displayed by the way (strong emphasis on “realistic”)

Wait, wasn’t that Bi teacher only receiving 1000 gold coins per month? That would make 500 gold coins a hefty sum.

People tend to believe more things they come up with by themselves… Author is fully applying this principle

I’ deeply saddened by the way the author tackled the ending. It felt rushed, meaningless, uncoherent. I am surprised I managed to finish the novel after the chapter 600. Spoiler 600 The seemingly important tournament was suddenly cut in half because demons managed to invade. And then we can see filler chapter griw at an amazing rate. But how can I tell if a chapter is a filler? Easy, if the story doesn’t have Isaac (MC), then the characters might as well not exist, because during the ending the lnly real driving force is Isaac. There are many things left unsolved, like how the hell did the MC gain so much power (I mean, watching bubbles made Isaac go 700->1000) Overall, a solid 2 for the ending that completely ruined my reading experience.

You might regret starting to read this novel, as its enrapturing, carefully crafted world might absorb you. The character development, the breathtaking and novel battles, and the story are elements that are greatly accomplished even after 850 chapters. The pace might be considered slow for a novel on this platform, but the storyline developed could only have been done that way. Never disappointed.

I swear 50% of the novel so far consisted of stat info

Why did you even walk bro… why do you even breath?! Maxwell woke up and chose violence

Even though the premise may sound silly, the feelings conveyed and the scenes depicted really made this a joy to read. Now that it’ finished I can confidently say that the whole story is well paced and the char dev is also impeccable.

Considering there was no emotional investment whatsoever, I don’t feel it’s particularly a “nasty” way of thinking as it is shallow.

Bro, the writing really leaves much to expect. The coherence and consistency is awful.

Hello! I know the novel is completed, and maybe it has great development, but I stringly suggest proofreading it as there are several inconsistencies throughout the text, making it hard to read. Hope it’ taken as positive feedback.