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should it not be 80 or 90 years old because she is somewhat older than the protagonist and he is 75 now
lol we not even know their age difference yet and it only one sentence showing she likes him did you never have a crush wen uou were young 😂
I will not comment on each paragraph or sentence I have a problem with. But here the word he is used for the goverment where it would be better except if you ment the governor or mayor or some one that represents the goverment in this city
I know translating can be difficult but depending on context you can ad or move words around so that the meaning is more clearly conveyed here yoy could have said. Elder Lui , I wonder if you have considered my young masters (offer ; proposal or which ever other word would fit the context better). This is just an example as there are other ways to change the sentence to better convey the meaning.
I dislike this heavenly oath thing in cultivation novels it a braindead method to solve problems of trust in novel and a missed opertunity for developing characters as when and how much a character can be trusted and to chose wether to take a chance can make the situation and characters more interesting.
Classic getting your life threatened over nothing trope that most of the times lead to clan destruction. Lol.
It was more then one day the buildings almost finished that he said will take a month but the author is rushing everything and gives no dialog between characters that builds up to the moment. there is a start and finish but author gives no in between
This needs to be fixed we dont pay for chapters with obvious faults
The officials and high ranking people seem to be useless they cant solve anything
This is dumb they did not even say much to each other how is there enough hate to want to hire some one to kill him
Lol looks like he is going to water board himself sound like a pain
Not to sure but mabe something lost in translation or a typo of author as this is a dumb reason for a argument and not to believable. Mabe the cultivator was splashed with water as it would fit the context of washing more than n breeze would.
he probly born 20 years ago
Tell me again how this girl is the protagonist of the novel he transmigrated to
We sll know what we signed up for when reading this type of novel only one in a hundred of them follow any well thought out logic but still we keep reading and all of them are basicly my numbers are bigger then yours so i win but the protag gets number multiplier ability and says i beat you
I think best option end miss protagonist she sounds like a b
What f up book did he transmigrate to it seems the villians are the protagonist of the book
Lol male protagonist need talent or have to prove themselves or need bargain or at least buy a spot for secret realm opportunities female got in cause of goodlooks and stole some poor guys spot leading to his death mabe her enemies also just give up because she politely asks them