AwfulAbsoluteSweet
I Love the Supernatural and Fantastic. The two things I’d wish for the most in life is to improve the health of my loved ones and to increase my height to 6ft tall, lol.
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AwfulAbsoluteSweet1mthCommentedSooo….how does this work in terms of the plot??????
Mikasa Ackerman wasn't as voluptuous or sexy as most natural devils, but she was still very pretty.- AwfulAbsoluteSweet1mthReplied to Alreth
And also only because he let them
"Is the Child of Evil a threat?" Xenovia whispered/asked Issei, finally snapping out of her funk. "Can I kill him?" - AwfulAbsoluteSweet1mthCommented"Leviathan is a magical girl," Xenovia was muttering to herself in shock. "Lucifer is henpecked. Both are sis-cons. My entire life has been a lie."
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Yeah, how no one else knew the “Eren” who injured Griselda is a major plothole imo (they did a plethora of background checks and found nothing strange), considering even Xenovia knows about the incident.
"Eren... probably already knows something is up with us," Sona continued, worrying her lip. "He's sharp enough and known us long enough that I can't imagine he doesn't know we aren't regular students. Today would just be proof. But he hasn't brought it up. It might be best to leave it for now. Until he asks, at least." - AwfulAbsoluteSweet3mthReplied to Daniel_Weber_6675
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This book has been deleted. - AwfulAbsoluteSweet3mthCommentedTeacher Gao Yang chuckled but shook his head, "The principal has sealed the news. All we know is that it's a girl."detailI'm a Pastor, what the hell is an Acute Gastroenteritis Outbreak Spell?!Games · Yiqian Qingdai
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Good point, but let’s ignore that lol
"Foreign scientists found that due to spatial rifts and otherworldly fragments merging with the Blue Star, the volume of the Blue Star expanded by 2.5 times…"detailI'm a Pastor, what the hell is an Acute Gastroenteritis Outbreak Spell?!Games · Yiqian Qingdai - AwfulAbsoluteSweet3mthCommented
First part of dialogue needs to be fixed. I assume that’s the part where he asks for any grievances to be placed upon him and not the muggle man
The child, standing before Darren, boldly declared, "...Something is coming at me... Even ordinary people are not the existence of your casual bullying!" Darren, though taken aback, remained indifferent. - AwfulAbsoluteSweet3mthCommented
I think he needs to use simpler words to really portray the childlike innocence. There’s something off about using higher level vocabulary when he was mistreated, malnourished, and orphaned
However, I think it might still be hidden in my body. Despite this, I've never seen it manifest over the years. I believe it to be benign and not harmful, so I haven't been concerned about it," Darren explained with simple innocence. - AwfulAbsoluteSweet3mthCommented
Nasty/disgusted tone
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Licking dog could be replaced for “simp” or similar term
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I have no idea what this sentence means
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Just use “Holy Father” each time it’s used. Also, I think “act” matches the sentence better than “play”
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Damage and pain reduction skill, essentially
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Ooh, great talent effect then
[The talent "A Promise Worth a Thousand Gold (Gold)" has been activated. You act as an anchor, using intense emotions as a medium, establishing a connection with the world itself in the depths of the unknown. Golden and transparent threads connect you with the world. An unknown existence will guide you in the direction until all the dust settles. (Due to the broad scope of the promise, the talent effect is somewhat weakened.)]