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Very well done story, I just found Alexia's romance very dull and the end of the second world didn't grab me to turn Alexia into a challenger with the system, it took away her main characteristic and that of the protagonist, I thought it was really cool that she almost replicated the system's techniques alone, I don't know.
Honestly I can understand people's criticism and their frustration,,I think the core of the problem is being a "fanfic" the story is ready made, for those who know the universes involved, there are things that are not touched (like reading a komi-san fanfic with a harem, for me it is artificial already knowing the original story),That's why I think that if you made an original novel inspired by comics, animes with their own characters, there wouldn't be so many criticisms of the plot. (but then it depends on the person too,I don't know much about Marvel I don't really like harem but I'm enjoying this fanfic for now so I hope you keep writing and thanks for the work if you choose to stop writing.)