Review Detail of DDDDDDDDDDD in Trials of the Multiverse
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Very well done story, I just found Alexia's romance very dull and the end of the second world didn't grab me to turn Alexia into a challenger with the system, it took away her main characteristic and that of the protagonist, I thought it was really cool that she almost replicated the system's techniques alone, I don't know.
Trials of the Multiverse
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First of all, thanks for the honest review, I appreciate it! As for your comments about Alexia, the romance part I cannot do much about, I'll strive to become better as a writer in the future, thank you for pointing it out. I'll do my best. As for me taking away her main characteristics, you might actually wanting to hold up on that, because even though she's become a Trial Taker, she's someone who has overcome the System. Her title [Fate Holder] actually makes her unable to get Authorities. She can only use her own strength and intelligence to understand more about them. If you want, I'll post something more detailed about this in the discord in the future