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how many 12 year old village girls living in a middle age fantasy world have a vocabulary like that? maybe some learned noble girl who likes to read and even then.
isn't this too much like brainwashing him to love someone?
how many people die in the usa to gang violence? I doubt every case gets solved
that's some vocabulary for a child
you don't travel with an empty storage room. Even if the profit is small you should always carry cargo. You have transportation cost either way
That quirky history teacher who tells outlandish stories? Obleck or something
doesn't he have a bulletwest on? That should lessen the blow
the amount of fist fights he gets to, would suggest that he takes a class like pugilist.
if he made a mistake:
A normal kendo match is over after at most ten strikes. Something like this:
Sorry if I sounded a bit pretentious."So many things wrong" is a saying and i didn't mean it literally.
There are so many things wrong in what you said.First, railguns use electromagnetic rails to accelerate a bullet. Second, there is something called terminal velocity.In free fall, it wouldn't infinitely accelerate the stone. The stone would still be deadly. But not more than a high calibre gun.Horizon has much better options without so much prep time than waiting for the stone to reach the needed speed.If he can do that with a big enough boulder, it would be pretty destructive.Like a meteor strike.
isn't nighteye dead?
Yeah, if it is possible to logic and think your way through, to some skills. Or if you have a basis you can build on. But the skills he gained are just from work of fiction and he doesn't even have martial or magic skills he can base them on. I can imagine him doing this after gaining more skills and experience. But at the start with nothing to build on, this doesn't make sense. Still, this is fiction and discussing how a power works is stupid because it works how the author wants it to work.
Satou couldn't just imagine a skill or spell and learn it. Either experimenting or seeing/getting hit with a skill/spell could he gain it.
I feel like I have to be offended on women's behalf. Thought as a guy who has to deal with our better half of humanity, I understand where he is coming from.
He was nerfed big thrice. And some more small nerfes. First was against nomu. Then the powers he got from all for one. And now again. The powers could become strengths later but now they just limit him. As I said, if it was a small nerf with valid reason, I wouldn't mind. But it feels like the MC gets nerfed and his powers twisted, only because of plot and because the author couldn't write a logical story if he doesn't nerf. Writing himself in a corner. So making the MC weaker is the only way the plot makes sense. Don't misunderstand me. I still think that this is one of the best MHA fics and very well written.
then why hype your MC so much? Always when it counts, his strongest powers get somehow blocked or nerfed. It's like power blue balling. If it was once or twice it wouldn't be so bad. But every time his powers would have made an easy solution, somehow they don't work like we were told. If you have to asspull a nerfe so often it has nothing to do with a smart opponent. It's not like the author can't write a good fight with a strong villain. All for one was smarter and stronger and the MC lost while putting up a good fight. This is still one of the best MHA story's. I'm just complaining because it's a otherwise a we'll written fic. I wouldn't care if this was a bad fic with no logic and plotholes.