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This is Stolen Work from another site plus plugging his own patreon. FAKE AUTHOR . FAKE AUTHOR . FAKE AUTHOR .
Keep it the way it is
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I think your too worried about not making a perfect character that your hampering your character for no reason. There's a difference in not wanting your character from being perfect and not learning from repeated mistakes. Even a handicapped monkey learns from their mistakes faster then the protagonist.
Can you please stop with the whole Alex is secretly "ripping off" franchises, might have me alittle funny the first time but it got old really fast. The odds that their are so similar franchises in this one universe is so low that the only way its happening is for "Plot".
Will admit that this romance doesn't feel like it adds much to the story, an doesn't feel necessary.
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Then whats the point in writing fanfiction? Because at the end of the day all the characters are out of character when written by someone other than their creator. And I wouldn't really call her more mature than the other girls rather slightly more experienced. You could easily replace what happened to her with any of the main cast and they would have the same "Maturity " as her.
Gonna be honest, as much as I like your story, the forced romance going on with the female oc is killing the story for me. For me it feels like she was created solely for the sake of not pairing your character with a canon one. I overall just don't find her interesting.