OCspeller
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OCspeller1hCommenteddiamond reckless -> diamond necklace
While on the other hand, Aditi is too happy, but still she miss Mahendra, she doesn't spend lots of time with him, but still... Anyway, she enjoys the party a lot, but everyone has to go work tomorrow so they decided to end the party early while leaving the party Ani gives her box and said this is from Mahendra, listening to this Aditi feel so happy, but doesn't show on the face, still Ani sense it. After saying thank you and goodbye to everyone they leave the party. After returning home Aditi placed all gift in her cupboard and open Mahendra's gift, he gives her a beautiful diamond reckless, this is her first diamond jewelry, seeing this she feel happy. but seeing these gifts she also thinks that she needs to return these gifts because she doesn't want others to say that her friendship is only for benefits. Today she is too busy to check her mobile so she doesn't know anything about Mruanl's post.- OCspeller2hCommented
you really need to work on punctuation and paragraph spacing. Because you used mostly commas, this feels like you are saying one parapgraph looooooong sentence. it is tiring to read. You could break up this paragraph into two, you know?
Also, Nisha and Kiyara also feel amazed, Nisha never like Aditi, before marriage Aditi doesn't gain weight so she looks so beautiful also she is intelligent at school and Neha found out that her husband admires her, so she starts getting jealous of her and seeing her in misery make her happy, but now after Aditi's divorce she has to do work in home when Aditi is in home, she doesn't need to do anything at home at also get a person to vent her anger, but now that person is gone, and nobody can tolerate her, for Kiyara she doesn't have any feeling for Aditi for her Aditi is just a maid, she doesn't like Aditi who is so dumb and doesn't have self-respect, but now seeing her transformation she feels respect towards her, anyway they are not crossing road so she doesn't mean anything Kiyara thinks. - OCspeller2hCommented
facecade -> facade
Raman doesn't believe that the woman in this photos is Aditi, his ex wife who is not so beautiful how can she turn like this, If she look like this always they might not..., thinking this he feel suffocated, anyway things can't be turn even though she look beautiful what she is doing, making videos of cooking unlike Adhira he thinks, even though he know in his heart that Aditi is perfect wife for him, After their divorce at first month he get married with Adhira he is very happy, but after some days Adhira start quarlling with him on small topice, sometimes she fight with family members especially his mom, he know his mom has foul mouth, but compare to Aditi she treats Adhira very well, during one fight her mother accidently push her, and they lost their child, or this is what he thinks that time, but later he find out that she got a movie and to work in that movie she do these things, he really feel angry, if she tell him, he might give her permsion for abortion, for this child he take the divorce decision quickly otherwise he doesn't need to give 1 Billlion to Aditi, even after doing this her career is not successful, and he also realized that the so called gentle facecade Adhira show earlier is all fake, she is just a sweet talker, and don't do any house work, his mom get in an accident she even don't ask about her health, he really feel disappointed, their home is mess, Kiyara and Ram also wanted to live separately, the money they required in home, is increased, nobody wanted to work so they have to hire lots of people. Now he understands how much work Aditi does, but still, he doesn't love her, not feel respect towards her. - OCspeller3hCommented
convince the child... conceive a child (?)
Pranita tells Aditi that she calls her brother and apologize, listening to this they both cried together, her brother never treated her badly but she keeps competing with her, but still listening her side, he also apologize, and now their relationship improve drastically also the same thing happen with her parents, they also apologize to her, and tell her that they love her, and want to see her happy, yes they want boy but it doesn't mean they hate her, also even if she can't convince the child it is okay for them After that Pranita also realized that she assume lots of the things, she never speaks clearly which is the biggest cause of misunderstanding. - OCspeller3hCommented
investing...? maybe you meant investigating? It makes more sense that way since Ani did not spend any time or money on Aditi.
On Sunday she meets Ani and Praniti and they talk like old friend, Aditi really know why this Ghosh family is so successful because they treat every person with respect, but Aditi doesn't know that Ani treating her gently because she is in their friend list even though he doesn't act like gentleman after his accident he becomes more cautious so after investing about Aditi he really think that this woman is really good person. And after meeting her he really got to know why is younger brother is so interested in her because while talking with her you really feel comfortable. She really looks like a person who well-read. But in reality, Aditi is not well-read yes now she is reading a lot and also listening book but her way of speaking is the knowledge she gains via listening radio, as she is too busy in work radio is her best friend, she listens to lots of the things, and lots of the people, the way they speak to celebrity also with the people who call them, she learned lots of things like how to pronounce, how to give importance to listener, also how to use different word for different time also because of radio her knowledge is well developed, and her mind is more flexible. Also, she experiences lots of things so she has the maturity, also she is a gentle person and most important thing is she really interested in people, in their problem, she is sincere towards them so people can sense her goodwill for them, so talking with such person people really feel comfortable. - OCspeller3hCommented
serval -> several
Also, Radhika shifts near her house so these days so their friendship is also developing. Radhika's daughter Pooja is 11 years old, the apartment where they previously live are going to huge renovation, so she ask serval people, Aditi suggest her this area, As Radhika is not home lots of time so it is best to live with people whom she know, she has very good opinion towards Aditi and her family, and yes there is always someone at home, so she can leave Pooja with them so she decided to move there. - OCspeller3hCommented
Jim trainer -> gym trainer
The next day she visited a nearby gym and surprisingly she found that the Jim trainer here is going to be celebrity gym trainer in future after one year he train a Mr. World, and after that affording him is quite expensive, but she found out that he is also expensive now, but it is within her reach, and also she found out that he is really handsome so it is okay to have an eye candy teaching you, and also you get an amazing body in just someday which is really a good deal, but all her daydreams come to end when he said, what you are saying is quite impossible in one or two month you at least have to give six month also you don't have any professional goal in mind so it is better if you minimize your goal, also your height is 5.6 which is good so it is better if you have 56 kg weight, having a healthy body is your goal showing off is secondary and you are also a mother so you need to take care of your self. - OCspeller5hCommented
Sweerthland... do you mean Switzerland?
8. Visit Korea, Hongkong, Sweerthland, Singapur, Australia, Sri Lanka, Nepal, etc - OCspeller12hCommented
oo crores -> of course (?)
The next day after sending children to school, Aditi decided to go travel agent, and in travel after booking trip for her mother and mau she decided to visit the new restaurant which is quite famous in their area, while eating her breakfast their she accidently heard a discussion, but the voice she heard feel familiar, so she turn around and look around them and get shocked this famous director who are discussing with a cameraman, they got famous when they made a regional movie in which they caste new girls and boys, but the story and the music also good and also the newcomer they caste have amazing acting talent so the movie which make in few lakhs is earn 100 crores, and how she know him, one reason is they got to famous and second Adhira wanted to act in their movie she also try to get in their movie and if she get the roll their maybe no divorce in her life because their shoot is very strict and also the actor has to devote to the movie they cant let them contact with outer word, after seeing them Aditi google them but found out that the movie which make them famous are not produced now so they are still that not famous, and also after listening their conversation Aditi realized that they needed money so she decided to ask them so she go towards them "Sorry to disturb you but are you making film?' listening this they glanced at her and said in frusted tone yes we are making but now I think that we are short of fund so maybe our movie may not be released" director Sable replied, listening this she asked what is the name of the film and how much fund you are lacking may i know, maybe if i found it interesting i will invest" actually Aditi doesn't watch much films, and now she only remember the name which are too famous,but having contact with someone like this director is good thing, also there are lot of chances that there film get successful, listening this director Sable also get surprised they decided they just tell name and not the story because who knows that she maybe steal their ideas, also he is the writer, producer and director of the film, this woman look rich but young maybe she will invest so he said "mam, i can't tell you story, but yah this film is based on a college love story, with multiple character and the name of the film is 'Maitri'(friendship), also i already invested 24 lakhs and i need at least 12 lakhs more, if you invest then i can show you the story and the cast also the musician are famous because they are my friend so they decided to work with me, if this film get released i can surely tell that it will became housefull" listening the name Aditi get relaxed this is the same film which make his successful so she decided to invest in this film anyhow she have 49 lakh in her account right now she doesn't' know detail about films so she said that they will sign a contract tomorrow and now she will give them check of 10 Lakhs of a post date and the remaining money she will give them after signing the contract also she tell them to calculate exact amount they needed, listening this the director and the cameraman get excited the director already invested all his saving and now if the film get closed he will bankrupt, if he get the extra 2 or 3 lakhs then the film will be more better, for few seconds he can't believe his ears, now he is eagerly waiting for tomorrow, after leaving the restaurant Aditi also get in good mood if she invested 16 lakhs then her share will be 40%, if the film get 100 crores consider 28% goes on tax and consider 22% go towards the cinema hall so the film earn profit of 50 crore without selling the rights to channel and also the right of music she still earn 20 crore which is too much interest on 16 lakh even in worst condition she will get more than 16 lakh and as he said the shooting is already started so she doesn't need to wait, thinking this her mode improved. - OCspeller14hCommented
is I -> am I
if in future if business goes well I will return your money I amnot asking much, is I?" Aditi said in calmer voice listening to this Anuja Adhira & Savita froze. - OCspeller14hCommented
jock -> joke
After listening this Naina get so angry and speak " You give me money ah what a jock, you give me money which is not even interest of the money which my father give your father, also when she is sick it is your responsibility to give money to her, you don't even buy a single cloth in her marriage but yes your daughter do a roll of destroying my daughter's life. - OCspeller14hCommented
grate -> great
The next day she first go to watch the house she finds to house impressive she decided to buy big one so that all the family can stay together to her surprise the house she wants is just for 2.7 million after paying agency's commission, tax, and documentation fee also the cost of inside furnishing she can get this house at 3 Million. She knows this type of house are not easy to find after just one year and also her husband bought 2bhk for 5 million where she is buying a 4 BHK with extra facilities. Her mood became extra grate. The agent said to her that she will get the house in 1.5 months and to move their worker will assign. After listening to this she said OK took the documents read them carefully she tells him that she will show these documents to her lawyer and tomorrow morning they will sign the papers and paid the whole money via check. After listening to this the agent became happy, this project is great but somewhat outside the town so not lots of people interested in this so they reduce the price and he got his first customer, so he is happy. - OCspeller14hCommented
lesser treatment -> laser treatment
After the 3 day diet she literally lose 4kg which surprise them, Radhika also tell her that Raman sign the paper he is ready to give her 1 billion but not the house according to their original plan and the date of divorce is after one week, if everything goes as decided they will get divorce in 2 month. Also in this whole week, she writes down all her recipes in English. & learn how to properly use a computer. She decided that after getting the money she will buy the new house and also she will do her lesser treatment. - OCspeller15hCommented
is Rudra = Chinu?
"Okay and" Aditi gets interrupted by the door's voice and sees Virat & Rudra coming in. she tells the system that they will talk later. Rudra jumps on the bed and hugs Aditi, he looks so happy by spending his time outside the home. And she knows the reasons the so-called home consist of people who only know how to bully both them & scold them. Virat asks her that he is going home and should he take chinu home before she answered chinu replied "no, I wanted to be with muma plz muma don't send me" she said ok "then I will be going call me if you need anything" Virat said - OCspeller16hCommented
collating -> colluding
"No, from my sources Wu Mei has become a devil cultivator, and from what Feng Jie tells me his brother is collating with Devil cultivators as well. So even the imperial guards that Father Emperor brings need to be checked thoroughly to see what kind of qi they have. If you detect any devil at all, execute on the spot. No questions." Feng Shuyu did not want anything to happen to the kids and others who were coming to join her sect. If she could not make this successful then her sect had no chance of getting off the ground. - OCspeller16hCommented
playing around with her captures... -> captors (?)
If Wu Shuyu was here right now she would recognize this Sister Mei instantly. It was none other than her Third Sister, Wu Mei. When She escaped from the capital she used her body to make her way out of Cloud Country and into the Desolate Lands. She was only in the Desolate Lands for a few days before being captured. After a bit of playing around with her captures, she was able to sleep her way into the Sect Masters bed. Since then she had been leading a very comfortable life here in the Blood Devil Sect. She never has to worry about mysteriously disappearing. - OCspeller17hCommented
*bear* with it
"Young Miss just bare with it for today. It's not like you will be needing to do many formal events like this after you head back to the academy." Yu Bi Tried to make Wu Shuyu feel better. - OCspeller20hCommentedCh 92 Legend Of The Daoist Temple Part Two
- OCspeller21hCommented
Missing period: Accompany the Empress and ignore your Imperial Concubine Mother. We will catch up later.
"Yu'er no need for that! Your Imperial Concubine Mother is just here to witness your glory. Accompany the Empress and ignore your Imperial Concubine Mother we will catch up later." Imperial Concubine Su said with a big smile on her face. She was very happy that Wu Shuyu was getting along so well with Empress Zhi Ruo. - OCspeller21hCommented
Greets -> greetings
Wu Shuyu had a blooming smile on her face as she was really anticipating the up and coming battles. She could not wait to see the blood of her brothers and sister flow off the side of the arena. She stood with the rest of the guests of the banquet as they all made their way to the viewing seats that were arranged for them. Wu Shuyu found herself being dragged by Empress Zhiruo to where the Imperial family sat. It seemed that Empress Zhiruo had taken a very big liking to Wu Shuyu. What surprised Wu Shuyu was that Feng Jie's mother was also here! She was not in the banquet but had come to watch the battles. Wu Shuyu quickly gave her greets to Imperial Concubine Su. "Imperial Concubine Mother."