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Aalis

Aalis

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I only started writing again recently so please enjoy my current work ~ Princess Simulator

2018-06-09 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Aalis
    Aalis8h
    Replied to Mu_Shin

    I had a look and on mobile track formatted fine so I'll check on PC, I don't know if there's much i can do if its a webnovel issue.

    Ch 48 Chapter 17 - The Subjugation of Amegakure [1]
    Reborn - A naruto fanfiction
    Anime & Comics · Aalis
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  • Aalis
    Aalis8h
    Replied to Mu_Shin

    Hi sorry i didn't know it was formatted like that. I'll go through it, the format might have changed when I moved it from Wattpad

    Ch 48 Chapter 17 - The Subjugation of Amegakure [1]
    Reborn - A naruto fanfiction
    Anime & Comics · Aalis
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Replied to Zatt_2784

    ohh I understand! thank you!

    Ch 2 Chapter Two "Back to the Past"第二章 “回到过去”
    Light in complete darkness
    History · Zatt_2784
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Replied to Zatt_2784

    paragraph start in the middle of the sentence and it says things like Emperor/Lilly without they were the same person.

    Ch 2 Chapter Two "Back to the Past"第二章 “回到过去”
    Light in complete darkness
    History · Zatt_2784
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Commented

    Grammar is a bit odd but a really good start author

    Ch 1 Lost in Time II
    Battle of Palaces
    History · Jade_Aster
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Commented

    she's your boss's wife don't do that

    I wondered. And wondered. And wondered once again. Awake and asleep, went and came back, imagining what would be like to touch her hair, to know her deeper than any other.
    Lady Sophia
    History · sunny_time
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Commented

    why didn't she run away with the silver she gave the maid?

    "Darn it…" I mumbled under my breath. One of these and I could live without worries for the rest of my life. That's when I got it. I can run away… Just somewhere far away from this darned novel. 
    Lady Sophia
    History · sunny_time
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Commented

    lololol

    "Can you look outside? I think I dropped something," I asked her kindly. She looked at me with contempt but did as I asked. When she leaned over to look outside, I pushed her and closed the door.
    Lady Sophia
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Commented

    I guess her thing is insecurities

    "What the hell?!" I exclaimed in a low voice fearing that someone would come. My eyes were different, now a bright amber color. I touched my face in case it was fake. Was I dreaming? MY EYES USED TO BE BROWN, POOP COLOR!
    Lady Sophia
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Commented

    the structure of this chapter is a bit hard to read

    Ch 2 Chapter Two "Back to the Past"第二章 “回到过去”
    Light in complete darkness
    History · Zatt_2784
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  • Aalis
    Aalis3d
    Commented

    the emperor is called Lily?

    Emperor/Lily Even if you don't come, it's okay for you to rest and take the appropriate treatment. "Thank you for your Majesty's attention, but I insist that I show you my gift to you." "I won't refuse, you can start," thank you.
    Light in complete darkness
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  • Aalis
    Aalis4d
    Posted

    Hi, just a message from the author. This is my first book in a while. I plan to update daily through summer so please feel free to leave reviews or comments, Thank you.

    Princess Simulator
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  • Aalis
    Aalis4d
    Replied to strawbfillers

    I have been away from webnovel for ever, but ther is a rewrite now, on wattpad and A03, sorry about this.

    Reborn - A naruto fanfiction
    Anime & Comics · Aalis
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  • Aalis
    Aalis4d
    Commented

    Did she just SA someone?

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 Eat Up and Wipe Out, Fifth Level of Qi Training
    Reverse Harem: Transmigrated into Book as Passerby to Dual Cultivation
    Fantasy · _Veencen_
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  • Aalis
    Aalis5d
    Commented

    Girl I think you got scammed

    Xia Jinxi was speechless and couldn't speak.
    Reverse Harem: Transmigrated into Book as Passerby to Dual Cultivation
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  • Aalis
    Aalis5d
    Commented

    Life is like rice 🍚

    However, the white-clothed man was very vicissitudes of life, and said deeply: "Life is really lonely like snow!"
    Reverse Harem: Transmigrated into Book as Passerby to Dual Cultivation
    Fantasy · _Veencen_
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  • Aalis
    Aalis6d
    Posted

    I really love the idea of an ignorant fantasy novel, please go into more detail and add more dialogue, this could be so amazing. like a new kind of fantasy.

    The Heart Of Igbo Land
    History · Onyinyechi_Omeire
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  • Aalis
    Aalis6d
    Commented

    Dunno how to feel about the chosen one fr

    "There is a prophecy," he began, his voice low and serious. "A prophecy that speaks of a great leader who will rise from the shadows to lead Eldoria to greatness. I believe that leader is you."
    FROM SHADOWS TO THRONE: The Rise of a True Heiress
    Urban · rill
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