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If so far Info the novel, this skill is Plot Armor for you, than I am surprised that you even read anything on this plattform.
I really like it that they fight together with an army. It would have been boring to see him fight all alone and probably even unrealistic, because the enemy could have exhosted him with the sheer numbers. But I would like to see Mark telling all these diwatas that he belongs to the blood demons, who were neutral, to clear this permanent misunderstanding. The diwatas should be old enough to know about Marks ancestors. How about it author? And my deepest respect for your great story! Definitely one of my 3 favorites on this side!
At some point there might be an enemy who is strong enough to destroy a soul or an energy... I mean, it's a cultivation novel. Everything is possible!
Dear author, it's a pleasure to read your work up to now. I really love your characters and how you portrait all of them. As a fellow writer (even if I write only in my native language) I know how difficult it is to give everyone such depth without prolonging the main plot unnecessary. Your Story is one of the few, I really wish to see as a Netflix series in full length. Happy Writing and I wish you all the best for your writing career. RiBBoN
Where are there feelings of love in this story? There has to be more to say something like that. All Characters are so superficial because there are so many of them. I think the story would be better if you focus more on a few of them.
This is so complicated... 😅
That's wrong 😉
Well... Can't the gas escape if the gas tank is ruptured? And in theory you are right, but a car will never have enough fuel to cause such an explosion. That's a fact you can ask every firefighter in the world.