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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive2mth
    Commented

    His reasoning is doodoo aids.

    Ch 6 I am Sorry.
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    Naruto: The Life of Shirai Haruno
    Anime & Comics · Aces_BigDaddy
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive8mth
    Commented

    Hey Author just a quality of life suggestion for your grammar and spellings, you can simply run your chapter through ChatGPT and Grammarly to at least refine the punctuations, capitalization, and spacing. Nice chapter btw.

    Ch 3 Transmigration
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    My Life in Another World with My Harem
    Anime & Comics · RedMoth
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive8mth
    Posted

    If you want to read something just to pass time and turn off your brain, this is somewhat bearable. Suggestions: This needs a lot of editing on its grammar, the tenses doesn't flow well making the reading experience very disconcerting. It also suffers from over description of the minor things; for example the MC is just going to simply park his car but the sentence include how he turns his wheel and how the tire screeches left its mark, like bruh it's fine for some scenes but turn it down a little 'cause I simply skim over it when it's too excessive. I also feel that the dialogues needed some work because it feels off for some reason. I just don't feel the dialogues engaging (that's just for me). For now that's all.

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    Supreme Villain: Seducing the Heroines
    Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive9mth
    Replied to ShadowYuki

    For real, it's a slog to read the chapters. Also this lolbingolol guy is present to all threads that says the things they dislike about this book, and ol' reliable lolbingolol will say something on defense. I dunno if this guy is a religious c*ck s*cker of the author or just the author's alt account.

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    Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive9mth
    Replied to lolbingolol

    Are you the author's alt account? You seem so invested on trying to reason out any criticisms in the reviews.

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    Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive9mth
    Commented

    Hey Author, just a quality of life suggestion, you can run your paragraphs in Grammarly or even ChatGPT for typographical errors. The most prominent error is the "isent" which should be "isn't". Thanks for the chapter btw.

    Ch 3 Chapter Three
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    The barber:Dc
    Others · John_Len_2493
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive10mth
    Commented

    The quality took a massive nosedive.

    Ch 206 the end of the war
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    Darkening System Start From Naruto
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Commented

    Holy sh.. , I just binged this for two says and didn't realized I already caught up. Love you Author~~

    Ch 345 It Won't Last For Long
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    My Second Life in Another World
    Anime & Comics · OVERLOAD69
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to EdwardElite

    Please come back 😣

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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to EdwardElite

    Daddy where you at? I miss your translation already😭

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    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to Aboode

    I really like your determination.

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    Marvel: Lust Summon System
    Anime & Comics · HentaiGodZ
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to GuessMyName

    Truuu, the author could have made a better character template so that all the things he do won't be so weird.

    Ch 8 Acquiring companies
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    Multiverse of Marvel
    Movies · thelightedghost
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to Unattractive

    Sorry for the typo there auto-correct did its thing again.

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    Marvel Universe : The Legendary Mechanic
    Anime & Comics · GoudaGenji
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Posted

    I really like the start and the concept, I'll just rate 5 stars and see where you'll go with this. Remember that you can't please anyone so there's bound to be some hate in the future. Good luck and have fan writing. *Filler* apology for poor england when were you when queen elizibith dies? i was sat at home eating beans on toast when telly ring ‘queen is kill’ ‘no’

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    Marvel Universe : The Legendary Mechanic
    Anime & Comics · GoudaGenji
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to Daoistgjs2EE

    You really didn't read the chapter properly don't you? It's clearly written that Michael was manhandling Metatron in the fight and Metatron was trying to escape. That's why he chose to risk it on fighting Michael 'cause its too hard to find another opportunity for him to use ritual.

    Ch 14 'Son of The Fool'
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    Multiverse Occultist
    Book&Literature · Loreheim
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to Reluctant_Reader

    Soo truue, he's like a walking ad for his Patreon lmao

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    Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse
    Anime & Comics · FanHarem
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Commented

    Papa please come back😭

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    My Fulfilling Life
    Anime & Comics · incest_lover
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive1yr
    Replied to SinnedToHeaven

    Naaah, no need to insult other readers like that. The problem for me with these chapters that supposedly convey character development was, like most of the complaints from the previous chapter, it came too abruptly. For me I was having a good time reading then the drama suddenly kicks in, its not like its bad, but it broke the fluidity of the story for me. Well yeah that's what I think

    Ch 25 Chapter 25: The Coward 2
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    A Narcissist's Rebirth
    Anime & Comics · J_Titan
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive2yr
    Replied to Unattractive

    I just saw the translators review, welp this is awkward.

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    Little Tyrant Doesn’t Want A Bad Ending
    Fantasy · Gaming_Cube_5129
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  • Unattractive
    Unattractive3yr
    Posted

    Good Read, my only attitude when it comes in reading novels is that I read it first before reading the reviews. Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading the book 'cause in the end of the day you have your own preferences and may enjoy things others do not. Happy Reading!

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    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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