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Still kinda weird
Not going you little weirdo for writing this
I get she desperate’s but really tho this on edge stupidity
Bro chill some of these phrasing are kinda cringe
Writing tip any writer worth anything does not Put he he he for laughing it’ cartoonish
Getting lazy with names are we
Of course you choose the most generic class
Ple for the love of god what people obsession for succubuss
Look ladies and gentlemen Sherlock Holmes
That was to quick need to let characters have their thought settle a bi t
Bad dialogue read some more books trust me
Another two class system borrrring
Oh no another two class system cmon lets be more creative please
Go read beserk then
Ahh yes some the Mc gets lucky a find a rare wea what’s next a nuke
Shame it’ alway spears or swords whips daggers or trick weapons
Soyboy