The problem with this ff is that no one believes that random powers to be so perfect "set to be OP"

Man this feels so Edgelord... I mean he can't control himself even with 3 lifetimes... rly disappointing he just need to be low-key... and more than that, he can't let go? He already died for vengeance does he want to go through it again? Illogical

I want to remind that the hidden villages where not very good for the class... if his mission is prosperity for the clan he needs to pay attention to this ( senju,uchiha ,uzumaki 100%betrayed by konoha,)

I feel strange reading of developing new kekei genkai like lava... I thought you need to be born with fire and earth affinities to be able to combine them... if not why every earth release experts don't do the same and use some new kekei genkai (BTW the meaning is bloodline limit...so yeah BLOODLINE)

I gave 3 power stones last chapter but this one lost my interest in the fanfic... come on who sleeps in a random ship in the middle of a battle

I find difficult to believe that in the word of pokemon 1 year is enough to bring a team of 6 to champion level, not to mention that the mc don't even start with 6 pokemon and that means some pokemon have few months to reach that level

Average ff light romance with happy lucky undertone no originality .......................................................................................................................................................................

What the use starting in kanto if you gonna give him others region's pokemon like riolo

Mc had too many pokemon he can't concentrate and focus in a team to train

Who the fk goes to the first date as double date and worst with you twin

Author has no ability to write and can't take negative comments....................... b ...

Dude you don't need to publish your ff if you can't handle negative opinions go write you ff on your personal file and don't make people read such low level writing

I think the autor took a average man and just because he transmigrated he became a genius capable of manipulate and obtaining anything he want easy... classic low level ff

Meh this ff had a very bad start e keep going down... from the beginning talks about love ... has already introduced pokemon from other regions mc didn't show any foreknowledge for a reincarnation

Filler fanfiction

I feel like every chapter is a filler

IF this is original then I must ask where the author learned to write like a translation

Disappointing... the kind of ff that has do many pokemon partners and so many special powers/ cheats that you even forget about half of those

I feel that the mc is weak minded fool... after 10 yrs of prison and being assassinated he don't plays intrigue games at court, plays like a idiot with people that clearly try to fk him up ... is like he forgot the dark side of humanity

Bah if I was the goddess I would send the dude back he asked for way too many things... this became a overpowered fanfic