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the story is very good, i read it a while ago and i'm waiting to put chapters together, i'll probably have to re-read from the beginning when it's time to remember everything, but apart from some confusing parts, the rest is all very good. All female characters have their characteristics and there are not a few female characters (so sometimes you might just forget one), anyway, all I hope for is more scenes with the mother and Celine(TEAM MILFs). But really, it's interesting how the author manages to give personality to the personalities, the MC isn't nice either, nor a scrotum killer without a brain, which is good. This is definitely one of my favorite works and has a great balance between history, Smut, plot and development. My only criticism is the amount of chapters posted, although this is understandable for the quality.
The idea is interesting, but pedophilia is not cool, neither in fiction nor in real life, this loli ngc is pretty disgusting. I stopped at the part where he says he's going to have sex with his sister before she's 14, probably 10 or 11, I haven't read the novel. In addition, the titles are 30 cap for some sex scene, which is time consuming by the system and the fact that he admits in the first cap that she (mother) probably also has desire for him.
So far, chapter 9, I'm enjoying it, the writing is good, it has good ideas, he knew how to build the world, but has failed miserably so far to give charisma to other characters, his 2 mothers and his sister, I hope it improves and that it shows a more affectionate relationship between them. But it's a pity that this novel isn't R18/SMUT, maybe the actor doesn't put in some scenes? RS, well I'm at the beginning so I can't say much more.