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Fallen_One7dCommentedMaybe because is you don’t let him leave the house, he wouldn’t have any chance to make friends…
Meanwhile, Kushina, still taking care of the party, looked surprised that Naruto was next to a girl, because she didn't know the girl. They were side by side, but neither seemed strange or uncomfortable with their presence. Kushina then approached, wanting to know more about what was going on there, since she had never seen her son with friends, which would make her quite happy.- Fallen_One14dReplied to scyfly
I’m pretty sure it’s actually written in wierd shape like hieroglyphics, Eragon originally learned it from Oromis in Eldest.
Another month passes as Eragon continues his training at the hands of his father. Brom has been teaching Eragon the alphabet, so to speak, of the ancient language. Even with a month's tutorage, Eragon cannot get a full grasp of its intricacies. At most he can figure out specific words if he studies enough. - Fallen_One28dReplied to WhitePhoenix52
I don’t disagree, still rude, but I would argue less so than slamming the door in their face.
The day was slow and besides his first class Ryan didn't have any with the rest of the coven, which was something he was happy about. Though he did pass them in the halls and was annoyed that Edward kept glaring at him, it was getting to the point that Ryan was considering putting a bomb in the guys car. - Fallen_One2mthReplied to Lord_Shiva_
I thought the same same things and clicked on the comments expecting this is what was being said. 😆
As the days unfolded, psychologists and philosophers weighed in on the societal implications of Zendesk's demise, sparking debates about the nature of individuality, acceptance, and the consequences of living unabashedly. The town, once known for its quiet simplicity, found itself thrust into the spotlight, grappling with newfound introspection. - Fallen_One2mthReplied to AstralFear
I think in this case, it’s not so much the religions themselves that are correct, but the power of faith (irregardless of what it’s in) itself that holds the power. This way, it doesn’t really matter what religion people believe in, but as long as they truly believe, it has power.
Among the many advances in the field of the soul since its discovery, it was proven that prayers made by a certain number of people and with a certain amount of religious belief are capable of affecting the frequency of souls. This gave a new rebirth to the power of religious institutions in the world, where it was now proven that not only does the soul exist, but faith and religion have a power that previously could not be proven by science.detailThe Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the UnderworldAnime & Comics · Maya_Matengele - Fallen_One2mthCommented"Well, with this, the protocol questions are concluded. Cheer up, Alex, everything will be fine. We have asked the main religious congregations of the world to pray for your well-being, and we have the best doctors and equipment available. Unless God Himself does not want it, today you will have a new body and a new life," said nurse Akira, with great confidence and faith that everything would turn out well.detailThe Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the UnderworldAnime & Comics · Maya_Matengele
- Fallen_One3mthReplied to Nasu
That’s a great way to make anyone spit up blood. “If the 18 year old titled douluo says his own aptitude is poor, then isn’t everyone else worse than trash.”
This book has been deleted. - Fallen_One3mthReplied to _chalk_
Not really, I thought he closed door behind himself as he exited for his run. He just ignored them.
The day was slow and besides his first class Ryan didn't have any with the rest of the coven, which was something he was happy about. Though he did pass them in the halls and was annoyed that Edward kept glaring at him, it was getting to the point that Ryan was considering putting a bomb in the guys car. - Fallen_One3mthReplied to Darkened007
Well back at class, they never taught us this.
It's the second series of Yu-Gi-Oh, the period of Yu-Gi-Oh GX.detailYu-Gi-Oh GX : Throughout Heaven and Earth, I alone am the Honored OneAnime & Comics · AndikaIndra - Fallen_One3mthReplied to alivegolden1
I’m guessing it’s more like the trainer id number than Pokédex number your thinking about.
Pokédex Number: #996922109 - Fallen_One4mthReplied to MythicalFanFicGod
For warriors, there is no better way to get to know someone than exchanging blows with them.
[More importantly, his character is satisfactory.] - Fallen_One4mthCommented
Are we talking lustrous orb?
"Congratulations to the host for extracting a special item, Palkia's Jewel." - Fallen_One4mthCommented
He’s plays with the puppies, cures the soul, and cures everything else with it.
"Over the past month, he appears to fly his battle suit to a pet store on Fifth Avenue in Manhattan periodically." - Fallen_One4mthCommented
Mission failed successfully?
Even if you were perverted, not practise some self-control so people will refer to you as a creep. But those guys didn't care about that. They always spy on the girls from kendo group when they are changing, get caught and get fucked. - Fallen_One4mthReplied to Glace
It’s not too bad considering English isn’t your first language. The grammar mistakes can be mostly overlooked. I would suggest though at least paying closer attention to make sure point of view is consistent. If it constantly switching between “Kyle did this…” and “I did that…” it makes it sounds like they’re two different people. I know polishing comes with time, good luck on your writing in the future.
Kyle looked at Anna with a smile, ''Thank you Anna!'' As i was eating my breakfast, he was thinking on how he got into this world, i remember the crash and assume that i died and came here. - Fallen_One4mthCommented
Massive quality drop starting here….with uncapitalized I’s and random switching between third and first person perspectives.
Kyle looked at Anna with a smile, ''Thank you Anna!'' As i was eating my breakfast, he was thinking on how he got into this world, i remember the crash and assume that i died and came here. - Fallen_One5mthReplied to YumeDream
Could be any of them really.
Afterwards, Lin Tianhao felt that the Lingtai suddenly became more awake. It must be a trace of little Wukong's residual thoughts that completely merged with his soul. - Fallen_One5mthReplied to swordknight_slept
So I looked it up and it’s either an elderly married woman, a county in the southeast of gansu province, or an acupoint having to do with finding one’s spiritual center or soul.
Afterwards, Lin Tianhao felt that the Lingtai suddenly became more awake. It must be a trace of little Wukong's residual thoughts that completely merged with his soul. - Fallen_One6mthReplied to X_A
Chief Chef.
"I understand. We will have something cooked as soon as possible." The servant bowed to him before running off to find a chief. - Fallen_One6mthReplied to Dragon_scar999
More like Obi-Yuan Kenobi. Emirite?
"I-If you, who killed a demon, don't qualify to teach, then nobody in our family qualifies! Please! You're our only hope!"