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This teleportation was against his caracter in the beginning he was supposed to be careful and now he is teleporting to places he could be caught in he is becoming cocky with his system given powers

Was it safe for Qin Yi to use the sword when he was attacked? He was exposing his wealth a little there

To author:Can´t you go to royalroad and post there it´s a friendly site and you can still put there a patreon for donations for example Beware of the Chicken came out there six months ago and caught attencion on the rising stars and favorite of the week and now its doing great on patreon with only a chapter ahead on patreon

Quick question when he goes in the garden does he disappear or it just his mind that makes a pseudo-body there?

Im lost where did the Dragon Cave come from?

The srtuff of using his secret treasure to carry the logs is a bit dumb why did he just carry them normaly it wont waste much time

"Calmed his back" is this right?It sound a little weird to me

To author: Maybe change to "What a joke."

Maybe change:"one point is that they want to find out what caused the Rejuvenate Pond to change."

To author: Maybe remove the 'Not' if your meaning is even a few of the disciples that were outside the sect returned to look at the pond :)

To author:Maybe put some 'a' in there like "Rejuvanate Pond Can Rejuvanate 'a' Person

To author: Nice thinking on making the power on the stone not permanent its a nice touch :)

Maybe remove the part: a slamming sound. I think the sentence will become clearer without it.

Lol ok that one was good :)

Maybe change: received 'a' sword slash in my hand during the duel

To author: Thank you for listenning to my input it feels nice to be heard I just saw the addiction to the story and it feels better to me, but I'm just curious could you answer by comment about why did he want to test the effect of the stone like that? It's just a bit of curiosity the story is good i just wanted a behind-the-scenes comment :)

To dear author: I think you should change the ending of this chapter because you already said that he wants to be low-key and doesn't want to attract attencion to his cheat but making him throw the rock he just made in a pond people pass by all the time makes him seem kind of stupid and against his character maybe make him test it by putting it in water inside his storage or maybe inside that new space treasure that would make more sense

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