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I sincerely hope this isn't the edited version. If it is, you need to get a refund ASAP, because you were swindled. No editor would allow you to swap from 1st person to 3 person in the middle of the first chapter.
Her name is Jennifer, you idiot. Jennifer. Nobody calls Jennifer Aniston "Annie".
Tell me you don't understand western names without telling me you don't understand western names.
Why would they be contemptuous? And why would Happy Birthday impress them?
This is only the normal response if you have absolutely zero social skills
Well that's the dumbest thing you could have said. It's so dumb that I'm really strongly considering dropping this story
Cringe
It's simultaneously cringe and sweet.
You really need to read things that aren't written by and for weebs
This is why everyone despises weebs
It's obvious: his entire identity is built around being good at football. He has literally nothing outside of it. Not being able to prove how good he is takes away the one thing he has in his life and reveals just how empty he is as a person.
He's a moron, alright.
So he remains an idiot.
Jesus christ, how dumb could you possibly get?
Instead he just has to worry about them doubting his sanity whenever he talks to himself. Seriously, why on earth do you think this is an upgrade?
This is honestly a really boring development. I'm honestly disappointed in you as a writer more than anything.