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  • Chaos1
    Chaos12d
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    "It'll briefly gift you my ability of the Dragon tongue, long enough to cast a spell or maybe even two, depending on your choices. If the situation goes bad, it'll surely be enough to catch the dragon off guard and maybe even cause a serious blow."
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    Harry Potter: Dragon Eyes
    Book&Literature · FakeViolinist
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos119d
    Posted

    really great story onlything holding you back is the gramer. some points of the story are just unreadable. please get some form of editing

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    Mind and Magic
    Book&Literature · 3737_irinol
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    Chaos129d
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    "Well Minister," Harry said as he stood up and swung his foot as hard as possible in-between his victim's legs. "I would like you to meet Peter Pettigrew." Harry said as he hit Pettigrew with a body bind and stomped on his groin. "Now, remember when I said Sirius Black was innocent, remember that? I do. We should probably talk about that now." Harry said as he casually re-stomped the groin.
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    The Real Harry Potter
    Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos11mth
    Commented

    +1

    1) Let him have knowledge of the DxD verse
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    Reborn As Hades (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · illyisabot
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos13mth
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    dont know what i expected. MC is bascaly all others. only thinking with his lower brain. like all other storys started really good but then it became wifu pokemon again. plot is a slow burn romance is forced and it is becoming very perdictable. so after 100 chaps im am gonna stop this as it is no longer fun to read.

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    God succession system
    Others · Harry_Dresden
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos13mth
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    i get people hating the british musiume and all but most of those relics would not be found if the bridish hadent funded the digs, expeditions and so on.

    "Hey, this is the cultural propriety of another race. Do you think I would have the face to do something like that?" I ask in fake outrage "Who do you think I am? The British Museum?"
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos13mth
    Commented

    send a team to earth to mess with megatron and prime

    Ch 12 LOG-06
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    Transformers Galvatron Self Insert (TFP)
    TV · Devastator_21
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos14mth
    Commented

    well another good story gone.

    Ch 81 Another time skip
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    Hades in the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos14mth
    Posted

    started great with good chapters and then the haem happend. story has huge potental but the bigest prob i have is that the MC spends toooo much time in his head thinking about usless stuff and he will stick it in anything that is female. hes starting to collect partners like pokemon.

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    Multiversal: The Shop
    Anime & Comics · Charlottes
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos16mth
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    gotta say the story is pretty good but the best part about this novel are the chapter titles. they sound like legitimate news articls.

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    Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World
    Fantasy · DamnPlotArmor
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos18mth
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    Tsunade, who felt Hiroto's touch, opened her eyes and saw Hiroto smiling at him. Seeing him, her eyes widened and she hugged him and shouted, "Hiro, you are back."
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    In Naruto World with Perfect Control
    Anime & Comics · Logical_Dot
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos19mth
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    started great. now its bascaly another harem. the MC is bascaly extorting sex for info and benifits. the mc bascaly ignores personal strength and takes everything in strides. would like to see what people do with the info he provides for the worlds. personaly Harems ruin the story in my opinion.

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    Final Fantasy Frontier
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos110mth
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    gunblade

    Spotting a predominately blue-feathered, bird-like fiend, known as a Trick Sparrow, pecking at the window of someone's house, Andrew surprised it by dropping down on it from above, slicing it in half with his Mithril Saber. He still made use of daggers, but after experimenting with many different weapon types, the two weapons Andrew felt most comfortable with were sabers and, though he had yet to bring it out in the world of Final Fantasy 9, long-barreled pistols.
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    Final Fantasy Frontier
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos111mth
    Posted

    really pay wall. this is a ff you are using content from others this should not have locked and privlage chapters. you are already using pat erion.

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    GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM
    Games · NunuXD
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos111mth
    Commented

    u back buddy?

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  • Chaos1
    Chaos11yr
    Commented

    well well now this is turning great. always liked vandal on of my favs hes nither good or bad .

    Ch 15 Chapter 14
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    Young Justice : Mercenary
    Anime & Comics · N_Nelson
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos11yr
    Commented

    make him move the uzumaki clan to his dimention. that would be funny and a big fyou to the naruto world

    Ch 105 105 - Another World
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Movies · NunuXD
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos11yr
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    the force marrage and merger is kind of stupid. cant he just get married then the contract will be filled then annule the marrage? the co tract only states be had.to marry and nutting more after. the same can be said with being the head of the zambi famaily.

    Ch 71 71) Hmm
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    Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos11yr
    Commented

    couldnt the goblins help in something like this.

    Ch 71 71) Hmm
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    Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time
    Book&Literature · Jerry153
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  • Chaos1
    Chaos11yr
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    finaly an MC actualy willing to do what needs to be done

    He accepted the quest immediately. Daichi's fists clenched and his teeth grinded in anger as he thought about what happened to his friends. 'Just you wait, Obito. I'll be coming for you one day. And unlike Naruto, mercy or the talk no jutsu would be the last things you will see from me.'
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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
    Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
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