personally i think you should focus on this fic

dont join any gangs the mc would lose his ability to choose his fate if. make this a quest if they truly go after him then have him take them down in some underdog way simple as that

naw you just not good with it in fact I like it its a 2 for 1 package a good backup weapon that you cant go wrong with

just go back and reread them. simple no

evee/ralts

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is shiran gonna learn/create the ftg or a version of it also the rasengan

russian mix martial arts

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no there no point in him being in anbu plus it will kinda kill his character that been built up another point is there is plenty of movie/filler missions that he could do to fill in the time

uchiha taro and uchiha masato

have him create something that does that then

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i like drinking posion

At this point, you need to go ahead and make a Patreon

no its not it gets irritating trying figure out the mistakes plus never heard of coaches in Pokemon its obvious you author not editing your work

look let's make this simple Daphne greengrass Tracey Davis cho Chang and Susan bones. putting the Mc in ravenclaw will make better sense