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please tell me this bit stops soon.
what an awful excuse. if that is true then say that in the story not in a comment. this is just poor writing.
this is actually the worst way you could do it. it ruins the flow of the story .
this plot point doesn't match up to the fact that he already explained to her that he looked at some memories of hers to know basic human stuff. remember, he knows what Google is so there is no way he doesn't know what a phone is.
just use majesty instead of Ali. Ali is dead and gone.
you are just making those separate stories entirely right? you wouldn't do something dumb like jumping perspectives in the middle of this story for the other versions of him right? because that would make me drop so fast.
thanks for the chapter King 🤴
just a little constructive criticism. you need to find better adjectives for your sentences. "Beautiful beautys" and "joyful enjoyment" are both repetitive and redundant. you should try to switch them with synonyms, it will make the sentences sound a lot better.
always remember you need plot for the "plot" to be better. so in other words, develope the relationships and it will make tge lemon scenes better