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mattzem3mthCommentedAfter being stabbed to death by a crazy ex, firsts things first, lets jump the first broad I see.
After saying this, Alex shoved his massive cock inside the beautiful red-haired woman's tight and moist hole. Something which caused her to moan like a whore, despite the fact that her hymen had just been torn.- mattzem4mthCommented
How did he come to this conclusion? What part of a ghost has to do with cultivation?
However, the female ghost who had killed him ten times proved that this world was not a low level martial world, but a cultivation world. - mattzem4mthCommented
I'm 1000% sure he died from an STD!
However, in the middle of the night, Song Shi died. - mattzem4mthReplied to Chicken_gravy
Handsome is just a pseudonym for feminine looking in all Chinese cultivation novels, the better looking the MC is the more like a girl they look. For some bizarre reason Chinese authors think, since women are attractive then the ultimate attractiveness for a man is to look like a women.
A handsome young man who appeared to be 15 or 16 years old was lying on a couch in a dusky room, illuminated by a single oil lamp. - mattzem11mthCommented
all your base are belong to us!
Becoming an Alchemist would also allow his clan to grew stronger since he would be able to concoct everything that had existed or was going to exist , he had absolute knowledge of alchemy. - mattzem11mthCommented
the grammar is so bad
In the Dou Qi Continent , Alchemist was the most respected professions and was way above the fighter of the same rank , a rank 9 alchemist like Yao Lao could cover the sky with one of his word , the problem he faced was the fact that the Hun clan of the 8 ancient clan was the one after him if not he wouldn't have died once. - mattzem11mthCommented
what's speaken?
The news about Hao Shen was without a doubt the most speaken of , people speak of the two genius of the Jia Ma Empire , they Hao Shen and Xiao Yan who were born the same year and already reached the 9-star Dou Zhi Qi realm , this made a lot of people incredibly excited because the two of them could cause the Jia Ma Empire to rise above the other faction surrounding it. - mattzem11mthCommented
the grammar in this novel is atrocious, how can you fill a clan with prodigy?
At the same moment the News about Hao Shen and Hao JinJing cultivations was also spread and become another hot topics , the Hao Clan became know as a clan filled with prodigy. - mattzem11mthCommented
who is hime?
before taking it out he went to were the ring was situated and took it , as he expected it was a storage ring , and after he bound it to himself , he was able to observe the gigantic size inside , it could be of use to hime as he would be able to stock a massive amount of things inside it , the storage ring was empty. - mattzem11mthCommented
This MC is too stupid to survive, Darwin award winner for sure!
He went to the second chest and opened it , once more there was no trap so he estimated that there would be none in the whole cave. - mattzem11mthReplied to Wallboii
in Chinese novels the more a boy looks like a girl the more attractive he is. Smooth white skin, lustrous black long hair and a face considered beautiful with just a touch of masculinity.... Is this not the description of every cultivation MC ever?
His appearance changed in the 5 years that had passed , he was taller , and his body forged by the harsh training of his Huang High Level Dou Skill had made his body as hard as steel , he had long black hair falling all the way to the lower part of his back and he could be considered handsome. - mattzem11mthReplied to Roloter
the author contradicts himself repeatedly throughout the novel thus far.
Hao Wei and Hao Shen were pretty friendly to each other since they were young and were just born 10 days apart from each other.(Hao Shen is the oldest) - mattzem11mthCommented
It literally said 4 months later then the next paragraph says he's been training under the waterfall for 6 months?
Hao Shen was curently training under the waterfall of the Hao Clan Estate , after practising here for 6 months he was extremly familiar with the place. - mattzem1yrPosted
"I hate systems" has the worst plot contrivances, Dues Ex Machina to the extreme. The author did not plan out his story as he consistently shoe horns in logic defying actions and abilities to progress the plot forward. Like giving the MC abilities that temporally turn him female with drugs and an operation in hours that makes him the most beautiful woman ever, the group that performs said operation are cave dwelling monsters that can finally turn human after hundreds of years. All so he can trick the slave harem system. Every person in that story just goes with the flow the MC sets with out any reason. An emperor that's at the peak of the world's power, with hundreds of years of expertise just does whatever the MC says. Makes no fucking sense. The MC is the worst hypocrite too, getting so enraged that he causes himself bodily harm at someone using the slave harem system, then when given the same ability by killing said system he rationalizes it's use for himself.
- mattzem1yrReplied to the_divine_being
this just highlights the lazy work ethic of these web novel translators.
Chu Xuan felt that at minimum, she should to cultivate the Emperor's Scriptures. - mattzem1yrCommented
isn't this exactly what he just got? A cultivation method/power that increases his mental faculties?
If there was a cultivation method that focused on mental will, then it would be the best thing for him to work on. - mattzem1yrReplied to Chewbertus_Maximus
Or he's just trying to pad his word count so he can post this chapter.
If he did not break through the Mortal Gate, he would only ever be a mortal. If he remained like this, he would only ever end up as a pile of yellow soil. - mattzem1yrCommented
I always imagined some over worked elderly alchemist, all sweaty and disheveled trying to keep up production for all the pills the systems give to MC's in these novels. Kinda hilarious IMO
"You've been cooped up for five days. The reward is one box of great profound pills." - mattzem1yrReplied to EchoesofVoid