Menita? Do you mean Mineta? Strange to spell his name wrong so many times in the same chapter.

I am a bit confused. In the first sentence you say his name is "Sukeroku Yami" and then further down his name is Sukehiro Yami. What is going on here?

So after downloading the app, signing in, it then asks me for coins to unlock chapters. Yeah, I guess I'm not even gonna bother reading the free chapters, no point. Oh well, off to finding something else to read.

How do i even read this chapter lol? Can I only read it on the webnovel app? That's dumb...

Went back on my phone and checked chapter 1 and 2 and now there are comments there lol... ignore what I wrote previously, I was on my PC then. I guess webnovel is just being webnovel like usual and bugging out. What I've read so far seems to be really good. So, I'm looking forward to reading this once more chapters have been released, cheers.

Alright. I only had to read the first chapter to know that it's not for me. Jesus, what kind of structure is that on your sentencing. Have you never read a novel before? Why write the sentence and then at the end show who said it? I'm out chief. Fuck this shit.

Department? Did you mean apartment?

Praise be the almighty RNGesus!

Thanks for the chapter!

Alright, I've read 10 chapters and thought I'd come back here and write another comment. The depressing shit stopped after the second chapter and afterwards it's been real good. So if anyone who reads this in the future is feeling similar to what i felt when i read the first chapter, just push past it. The story after the beginning is actually good. Thanks for the chapters!

Okay, okay. This is getting better. I wonder what his plans are for the future though. Is he still gonna be a civ spy or is he gonna do something else? He did mention to the old man that he wasn't gonna be his apprentice anymore but I'm not sure if that was said in that moment to get the old man to run or because he genuinely has decided to go do his own thing, or something. I'll keep reading to find out. Thanks for the chapter

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"After that, Gu He crouched down in the sleeping position of the purple crystal winged Lion cub..." Dude. He crouched down in a sleeping position? How does one crouch down in a sleeping position? Do you first assume a sleeping position while levitating and then you "crouch" down? Did you mean that he crouched down to inspect the place that the purple crystal winged lion club used to sleep in? Because if so, it took me a second to understand. Am I the stupid one here or does this bother anyone else? This is really starting to bother me...

Read the next paragraph and now I'm even more confused lol. Whatever I guess...

"The gap between a Dou King and a Dou Venerate..." he's not a Dou Venerate though... he is a Dou Ancestor. To be honest this story feels like it is being translated by two different people right now...

Why is it called Near and far technique now? Did you not type in a authors note previously that you didn't like the name and thus named the technique Ascension steps? These translation issues are breaking my immersion.

Fighter Ancestor? In the previous chapters it was always called Dou Ancestor, why did it change now?

Why does it say here on chapter 82 "Chapter 83...." after you scroll down a bit?