i stop reading after chapter 4 due to the author inconsistency, let me make my point here the mc should be older than haku, but it keeps getting changed from older bro, to lil bro. at first I thought oh ok then i read it wrong or prob the author changed it, but then he became the older bro again wtf, if this fanfic isn't translated, please be consistent bro, make a few notes or something, stop changing things at ur will, but honestly it got potential for a good read, idk bout the update stability so i'll just give it 5 stars for now

so shou is 7 or 4? the big bro? or the lil bro? is this translation?

should be second, third war is the time where minato rise

why not change his name a bit bro 😭

rightt?? i thought so too XD

still cryin no matter how many times i see this scene, no matter how many times i read it 🫠

yeah i've read it there too, and i'm planning to change the character to SI at that time, honestly it's pretty good if you compare it to the other chinese naruto fanfic

fck wrong account...

AUTHOR SHAMELESS REVIEW HEREEhonestly this is a pretty good chinese fanfic, i think it's better than the uchiha counterpart

well... i only hope you don't drop this until 200chaps at least bro 😂

yooo finally meet some new comments 🥹

well... probably, i dont really know bout the others, but i honestly only read fanfics with few chaps because i got bored and want to try something new, maybe found some gems and leave my mark as one of the first reader lol

finish this one

because it is early, that you need review bro, idt many people would want to try reading fan fic with only a few chaps, the more people see the less it might get abandoned in early chaps 😂

still good but yeah a bit boring, but it's still early chapter so no comment here

thx for the chaps, good enough bro, still imaginable in the head and not confusing, i still suggest to post chaps daily bro ur still in the first few chapter if u post it after a few days we might forgot some things(like me) and ur chaps will be less impactful and u might lose a few reader (just my opinion)

all hail lloyd

please the name, correct it at least 🥲