Loved the characters. The author clearly loved the world that he/she is building since it's really compelling you to read for more. I would like to see some spaces for each paragraph, but other than that, perfect!
This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together
A beautiful piece of work and it showed that the author really cared about the world and its character. Good job, keep it going!
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Intriguing and make one wants to read more. The characters felt real and the way you weaved your words were amazing. Recommended
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Just a shameless author reviewing his own works, don't mind me. :)
Seriously though, please leave a constructive review so that I can improve as a writer [img=recommend]