ah darn 😔

yooo nice, a unique way to start the story frfr, the right amount of pace, so it doesn't drag too long either, shhhhh 👍👍

that last line frfr

pacing's too abrupt, he goes from point A to point B, and back to point A to go to point C with little to no transition. Ideally it's better to add something in between to make these chain of events flow more smoothly.

ty4chp 👍, idm any upload schedule, current one is fine as it is

Story is good, upload is frequent, but chapters are very short in return

not so sure abt this and the previous chapter, as it is essentially him waking up from getting passed out, receives an explanation, then pass out again, it gives of a out of place segment to the flow of the story. For this part, I'd say something like the first iteration of your previous work would be more appropriate, with a slight change, in which he has woken up after he got saved by the demon queen from being poisoned, then she can use that as a leverage or something to make Leon more complient of her request

I see, quite unfortunate that it happened 😞, considering the story was very nice, but welp, there is now this iteration, so I'm looking forward to see how this story goes 👍👍

iirc there was a novel I used to love reading here be4 it got removed entirely 😔, it's plot is roughly similar to this, are you the author of Dragon Empress won't let me go? (mightve botched the name a little, but it's roughly like that) also keep up the good work 👍👍

not bad, as far as info dumps go, this isn't too overwhelming

ohh it was a dream, it was abit difficult to tell due to abrupt and how out of nowhere it was

huh what happen? so abrupt the time skip

going to the 2nd arc, which unfortunately has skipped major character building, progressions & interactions with named characters, so much so that it felt like instead of a plot hole, we have arc holes, as it felt like there should've been 1~2 arc before he went to the academy, alot of the crucial details that explains his growth and main goal has been completely skipped, so much so that why even bother adding all the parts on his journey, when he could've just be falsely accused while he is studying in the academy, but is still manage to stay there due to it being rumors and lacking evidence? wouldn't that make more sense rather than having to skip arcs just to lead to this academy arc Also, the characters the protagonist has interacted with during his adventures from the 1st arc has been discarded into obscurity, specifically the mentor, the heroine and villainess, It is a waste to not see them at all in the 2nd arc since they have the potential to be with him in the academy as his allies. Also, why isn't he disguised when he enters the academy? couldn't he have received help from a heroine to influence the academy to give him a backdoor entrance as someone else or something? why go through all this annoying drama where everyone wants to pick a fight with him :/, pretty dumb move if i say so myself if you gonna show your face in public after being accused in public for raping the princess and not get worried abt the risk of being assassinated by a 3rd party or something.And lastly another major complaint I have, is the tell but not show, because of the many timeskips, alot of the powers he earned are just randomly popped up out of nowhere, the girls he rizzed are said to be obsessed with him, but where, i cant see it, he only mentioned it in a paragraph, I guess I'll just have to his word for it 👍tl:dr: too much skip, story suffers from tell but not show, and unnecessary drama

didn't he train for like a few months be4 this?

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