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omgitsaray16hCommentedHow can they get out when they are not inside yet?
Lincoln was completely confused and couldn't hear a complete sentence. He pushed the people out desperately, "Get out! Get out!"- omgitsaray16hCommented
His name is Lin You.
Lincoln, hungover and not yet sober, was awakened by the urgent knocking on the door. He felt dizzy and struggled to find his way to the door to open it. - omgitsaray3dCommented
Warrior, not samurai.
He had noticed during the fight that this leader of the wolf cavalry was a Samurai. - omgitsaray3dCommented
The raws say "young master," not master.
"Master, a few barrels of White Wine from the Winstar Manor were just purchased for the wine cellar a few days ago. Would you like to try some?" - omgitsaray3dCommented
The raws say a kite shield.
A Yuen Shield with an engraved roaring bear head was hung above the fireplace, and around it were various styles of paintings and animal skull specimens that boasted of the host's strength. - omgitsaray5dCommented
Killed by his enemies? That means he is already a ghost!
It turns out, the tomb's owner was named Qian Hong, a Foundation Establishment Stage Cultivist. More than 3,000 years ago, he was pursued and killed by his enemies, and he had no choice but to hide in this Immortal Realm. - omgitsaray6dCommented
Gangster wind, huh?
The Antique Seeking Official's breath hitched and his face turned slightly pale. He immediately kowtowed, apologizing, "I am incompetent. We've tried various methods but once we reach a certain depth, we're shredded by a sudden Gang wind. The Gang wind is formidable, it even shatters our hardest armor in an instant." - omgitsaray6dCommented
So random magical artifact out of nowhere and no mention of how he came to get it, saved him. Plot armor at its finest. Why not say he bombed them with his grenades and a RPG?
[In Anchor Year 33, while entering the court alone, you were surrounded by the Palace Guard trained by Emperor Kangning. Fortunately, with the help of a magical artifact, you narrowly escaped death. Enraged, you decided to overthrow emperor and establish yourself as Emperor, but were dissuaded by the begging of the Empress Dowager and the persuasion of court officials. Instead, you purged the emperor's close officials. Since then, Emperor Kangning had only the title of Emperor, but not the authority.] - omgitsaray6dCommented
I don't like modern stuff thrown into the past, because it opens up the question, how does he know how to manufacture it? And then, why not go manufacture a spaceship while you're at it?
[In Anchor Year 4, you successfully manufactured a batch of explosives and flintlock guns. With your new firearms squad, you eliminated and conscripted nearby outlaw groups into your service.] - omgitsaray9dPosted
Like other reviewers have said, this novel is incorrectly named. The novel follows the MC 10% of the time while 90% of the time, follows the story line of the eldest disciple with a sword body. It should be named Adventures of my disciples, or something similar. The MC only appears when his disciples are getting bullied by experts too strong for them to handle. Otherwise, he's hiding in his mountain eating and sleeping. Is the story interesting? It's okay, just the disciples meeting people, leveling up, and fighting across realms. Nothing special and nothing that makes you want to keep reading. This is just an average novel for people who don't have anything else to read.
detailI See the Aura of the Great Emperor in All My DisciplesEastern · Don't Let Me Stay Up All Night - omgitsaray11dCommented
I love this high quality translation from Atlas Studio
Chou Siwu had killed the young master of the Chou family in one move.detailI See the Aura of the Great Emperor in All My DisciplesEastern · Don't Let Me Stay Up All Night - omgitsaray12dCommented
Forcefully changing the mc's name into English has now made other chinese references super awkward in the novel. This is why I always prefer keeping people's names in Chinese.
Like the "18 Dragon Subduing Palms", a remarkable martial art, when Qiao Feng performed it, he could sweep the world, however when it was Yelu Qi performing, it was comedic. - omgitsaray12dCommented
Do you even read what you MTL? The raws say shuttle, and not a single chinese character remotely talks about time.
He packed his bags and boarded the time machine. - omgitsaray12dCommented
Zhong Lei is the name.
"Name: Carrie Thomas." - omgitsaray12dCommented
If someone is asking a question, there should be a question mark.
"What are you doing!" - omgitsaray12dCommented
Chen Feng turned into Harrison Clark, lol!
Harrison Clark sat curled up by the window, watching the sunrise alone, as still as a statue. - omgitsaray16dCommented
The raws say, "I gave you face but you wouldn't take it!"
Seeing this, Li Xuheng cursed, "You're so ungrateful!" - omgitsaray16dCommented
It's not fried, it's traded in the raws. It's a lost in translation kind of thing.
Two hours have passed now, and the price of the game bracelets has been fried to millions per piece, and this price is increasing at an astonishing rate every minute. - omgitsaray17dCommented
Your sister is a hand-grabbing cake! Your whole family are hand-grabbing cakes! It's a scallion pancake with or without scallions.
The young man was in his early twenties, eating a pancake with big bites while drinking soy milk. In addition, he was holding a hand-grabbing cake and a bowl of eight treasure congee. These were not for anyone else but his own breakfast. - omgitsaray17dCommented
It's not a game warehouse, it's a game cabin.
Because game warehouses were expensive, and early game warehouses could only play designated games from game companies, virtual reality games were not widely popularized for a long time.