angel_romero
of reading
2005
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Is this a rewrite of the other story? or a reupload?....................................................................................................
Man, it would be so good if the dialogue was better. everyone talks the same. they talk and over explains everything, King Cobra says "guys" like he's not a noble for Christ sakes. its painful to read, the characters should talk like they are separate people with different origins and upbringings, not like clones of each other. if it wasn't for that it would be a great for me.
cope more, poor person.