Nice story, would recommend the story. If anyone has recommendations for similar books, let me know. Nice story, would recommend the story. If anyone has recommendations for similar books, let me know.

Entertaining read, would like to see more chapters on/about his life outside the set. Anyways, good luck to the author and hope to see more.

One of my favorite books on wn, hope to read many more chapters soon. Kudos to the author. And now I must continue writing to post this review.

Lol, arrived to this book from the suggested page after finishing reading your book, awesome novel, and hope to see many more chapters. Would say it's one of my favorites here on wn. On a side note, will give this book a try and hope it's good as well.

Very good story, would recommend it for sure. Hope to see more chapter soon. And almost at the required characters to post this review, at…

Great story! The dialogue between characters is used well, and kept improving since the first chapter. I like stories that use dialogue to move the plot along, as well as build the relationship`between the characters. In shorter terms, showing instead of telling. Lastly, I find the plot/story interesting.

Great book. Would recommend it. Great book. Would recommend it. Great book. Would recommend it. Great book. Would recommend it. Great book. Would recommend it.

Been my top story in web novel since I started reading it. Wish there were more like this in the site. Great job to the author for creating a realistic world were the system/gacha isn't the protagonist and only plays a supporting role. I really like how the author moves the plot through character interaction; that's to say, the plot doesn't seem to determine the character's dialogue, but the other way around. Which isn't commonly seen in wb, in my opinion.

Good story, would recommend to others. I havent read the original series, but it was entertaining nevertheless. Now, I have to reach the min words.

Character driven story. It is one of my personal favorite in wb, love the dialogue between the characters, the story and can't wait for more chapters to come out. Recommend 100% to everyone

I only started reading the book since it was on top trending, but wasn’ expecting much. Was shocked to find that it’s an amazing book and kept me entertained until the very end. Hope the author continues this work. All the best

Love the stories direction, but just starting the story and may edit my review later on. Having said that, there are a couple of things that stand out to me: Writing quality: Seems to be well written but lacks flow. Good vocabulary though. Story development: So far so good. Character design: Suffers most from "telling and not showing". So far, instead of showing us through dialogue and character interactions, it just tells us. World background: Similar issues. All that said, love the premises and will keep reading to see how the author improves.

Like the story and reads well but would could benefit from an editor to make the story/sentences flow better.

Great original story. Love reading something new on this website. It has been well done and would recommend this to everyone. Nothing else to say. Enjoy

I would say it’s the best fan fiction in the whole website. Would recommend this book to everyone, it’s incredible. I would say it’s the best fan fiction in the whole website. Would recommend this book to everyone, it’s incredible.

editor required

Fendrel

Weird sentence, doesn't flow well.