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empire111dReplied to AzernaWoosley who is managing his investments is the future head of Atlantis (foreshadowing )
"O'Neill. It's my pleasure." Beth reached out to shake the attractive man's hand, he was slightly younger than her if she was any judge. When their hands touched a warm feeling swept over her.- empire111dCommented
"toujours fidele et fort" => "Always faithful and strong"
"No wonder mum always considered being a Black meant practically bring royal. Shit. Uncle taught me some financial stuff but, gees. What's this? The de Sable motto "toujours fidele et fort" ? I wonder when that got changed. What all do I need to sign?" He signed the many documents and at the end Splitaxe handed him the Lord rings for the Black family and the de Sable family. He put them on first the Black then the de Sable. "I'm lord now right?" - empire119dCommented
all the first world countries provide free education, if for no other reason than to have educated workers
During this time, it became evident that Axel possessed exceptional intelligence and potential, prompting the Orphanage to enroll him in school. He excelled among his peers, catching the attention of Commander Preston Cole, a Naval Officer. - empire130dCommented
I think you need to make your MC older because at the moment you have a 14-year-old living alone which isn't going to happen without some serious justification about how he got emancipated. Also unless he was a child when he died on Earth then any action at school just makes him a predator going after 14-year-old girls
Ch 1 Opening: Essence - empire130dCommented
14 years old
The guy didn't seem to realize how handsome he was, or perhaps his character was a little too good, like Clark Kent, and perpetually virgin. He had a crush on Lana Lang, just like Clark. Nate, the new one at least, was not attracted to Lana at all. - empire130dCommented
prince of Krypton, --- not a thing
[The more you use your abilities and skills, the stronger they become in relation to your own potential. This rate of growth is currently limited to the capabilities of a Kryptonian. One of your birth conditions and talents. Naturally, you are not the prince of Krypton.] - empire11mthCommented
a long shot
It was still not as strong as Jenna's espera, not by a close shot. - empire11mthReplied to Vikrant_Utekar_5653
ye but white harbor is on the east side of Westeros, so they need to sail all the way around dorne
Uncle Ned, ever the practical strategist, leaned forward, his hands resting on the map spread out before us. "Our best move is to link up with the Mallisters at Seagard," he suggested, tracing a path along the coastline. "They have experience dealing with the Ironborn and can provide valuable reinforcements." - empire11mthCommented
gonna catch them all
Ned couldn't help but smile at Cregan's earnestness, feeling a swell of affection for the young boy. "You'll be the best Stark there ever was," he assured him, ruffling Cregan's hair affectionately. - empire12mthReplied to tamil_selvan_1054
yes but is it 1%+10% =>11% Or 1%x110% => 1.1%
Then he remembered the attribute on the Alchemy Room panel, the one that increases the chance of a Pure Elixir appearing by 10%. - empire12mthCommented
10 mu = 1.64737 acre 1 mu is only 26mx26m
Yet the system remained as miserly as ever, still giving just one Harvest Point per acre of land. - empire12mthReplied to DragonKingAbbadon
no way he could know that though
Just the thought excited Lin Jing—every day he would have 4 more hours than others. With this, how could he worry about his cultivation not progressing? - empire12mthCommented
only if you only age at the outside rate
"If I calculate this, haven't I made a huge profit?" - empire12mthReplied to DaoistZu6Ql3
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- empire13mthCommented
Even a Dou Zong would NOT be unharmed if they faced it."
"This is a space lock set by a Dou Zong powerhouse, with extremely strong protective capabilities. Even a Dou Zong would be unharmed if they faced it." - empire13mthCommented
*by six stars* 2+6=8
Xiao Ze obtained the Perfect Calamity Poison Body, directly elevating his cultivation to six stars, becoming an eight-star Dou Practitioner! - empire13mthCommented
What ????? Uthang City Warcraft Mountains
In the original text, it took Xiao Yan five days to leave Uthang City and rest somewhere in the eastern part of the Warcraft Mountains. - empire15mthReplied to WritingAndWritingCh 3 Good Neighbors