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I like the Story so far. At one Point though i was suprised of their age in combination with their general mentality, but the explanation came shortly after it. If you have serious considerations that it could lead to problems with nfsw content if people dont unterstand their different growing times because of their species, then converting their ages would be the best option without changing to much. Personally, I do not care, I only care for more chapter [img=update] haha
Liking? Loving! [img=recommend] The pace is good, you could see in which direction her feelings develop. If you think yourself it's to fast, you can slow down too and create a longer tension. Up to you, but on that note [img=update]
Thanks for the chapter! I think your story goes well because it makes me intrigued and it's still only the beginning. The overall storyline is pretty solid for some action and it's fun to read how their relationships will develop. The scene of Sol and forest was really good in the chapter before. I hope you keep enjoy writing.