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Axteria2yrCommentedthe last comma should be period :)
Frey straightened up , his daughter was a playful child , her being soo awfully serious shocked Frey , he knew that the matter would be extremely serious for her to act this way.- Axteria2yrCommented
*whether :)
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Once his feet is aligned :)
The ugly creature's attacks missed as kicked its legs and made it fall forward. The two of them were close, so the ugly creature tried to stab its fingers toward him. Yet, Rudra rolled on his back and pushed with his hands once his feet aligned with his opponent. - Axteria2yrCommented
Isn't this Naomi?
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Yesterday? Maybe it should be today or tomorrow author-san
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It was coated with all her mana lol. To use all your mana in infusing a weapon as a mage is nothing but a desperate defense/attack because mages have low physical stats. She could only hold it off for a while but not in the long run if you think about it.
Ch 55 The battle is over and the debt is settled - Axteria2yrCommentedCh 1 Restart Your Life
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"taking care of her little brother" O.o
Lith grew increasingly fond of Rena, she was more like a loving aunt than a sister to him. He could see himself in her, taking care of her little brother as he did with Carl. - Axteria3yrCommented
Pipay
Nile saw a zombie clinging onto a metal railing like a monkey. It is a male zombie, but it has an overlong hair like a rockstar. One of its eyes is popping out. Its nose is disfigured. In its mouth, Nile could see the rows of teeth and the missing parts in between. The zombie no longer has its lips. - Axteria3yrReplied to DasavarCh 60 The Entrapping Instance
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First paragraph in the novel that makes sense to me
Seeker Carlean sat down with eyes that could shut tight at any moment. His teacher was not making the harsh and boring lesson any easier to learn. He stared at the board and tried to force his eyelids to open as wide as it can. How can any normal 16-year-old manage to fight this unassailable battle? - Axteria3yrPosted
First 3 chaps are a mess. Some sentences are missing commas which makes it harder to read. MC has too many names. You don't know what the hell is happening. It is like you are giving some nouns and we just have to swallow it because it is there. For a genre which the MC will go back in time, those 3 chaps are pretty much skippable since you can't even comprehend what Is happening.