First 3 chaps are a mess. Some sentences are missing commas which makes it harder to read. MC has too many names. You don't know what the hell is happening. It is like you are giving some nouns and we just have to swallow it because it is there. For a genre which the MC will go back in time, those 3 chaps are pretty much skippable since you can't even comprehend what Is happening.
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