I love the culture that these books bring to life. I actually got hooked when I started reading Blue Pheonix which is surprisingly not here. I've been using Wattpad, now I'm using Web Novel.
This is a really good comic, I haven't read the actual book yet, but I know I'll love it cause I went through all 70 chapters of this in just under 2 hours. it is fantastic!!!!! The drawing is amazing as is the character creation.
sounds like a type of 'bead'.
As a massage therapist myself you never refer to the "bed" as such, always say table so it doesnt sound sexually inviting.
Really, then, would you let me edit it for you. Because in the first chapters you switch from 'him' to 'me' and 'I' quite a bit, but I understand if you like it as is. Thanks for replying to my review, a lot of authors don't do that.
This story has a lot if potential and I really like where it's going just fron the first 2 chapters, but the grammar is subpar. If it was put through Grammerly it would skyrocket. Unfortunately, as it is now, I have no desire to continue reading. I really do think it's a good idea though.
what type of RPG?!
is it like Merlins: Immortality ?
I won't drop it, I couldn't if I tried. However, school is keeping me quite busy. Once I'm done or I have some time to breathe I'll hopefully be able to continue it. I'm glad you enjoyed what I've written so far.🖤💚🖤😁
it's a free meal
I love the idea of this book, it has amazing potential. However, the grammar is subpar and chunky. I would recommend running it through Grammerly, it's free and easy to use and if you download it will automatically install itself into the Webnovel writing page.
This story could be amazing, however the the grammar is awful and in chunks. If the author could just put this through Grammerly it would rise 100%.