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DraskelClan24dCommentedyou do not know what the word "inconsequential" means. stop using it.
"Viola, no!" Grace, level 61, also in that group, shouted upon seeing her army mate's inconsequential action.- DraskelClan27dReplied to DreadSnoop
I think you are misremembering. Abby had a full set of Black Grade techniques that she eventually changed all of them to silver. As it has, multiple times, been explained that changing techniques is mildly detrimental the more you do it, it was explained that Abby learned a Golden Defensive Technique upon changing stages. This is also when the author made tiny reference in a paragraph or two to the fact that most of Minos combat related techniques require a "clean slate" at stage change to be learned and that he only has few techniques at the Golden Stage that can be changed to, most of which aren't combat related.
She only had one Golden-grade combat technique. As such, rather than putting herself at risk by attacking opponents, this woman of Minos usually focused on protecting allies, helping to weaken opponents who attacked them. - DraskelClan1mthReplied to DreadSnoop
It was explained earlier that most of Minos Golden Grade techniques had to be learned as a primary and could not be switched to as Abby would need to do so I think she only has her shielding technique at the Golden Grade.
She only had one Golden-grade combat technique. As such, rather than putting herself at risk by attacking opponents, this woman of Minos usually focused on protecting allies, helping to weaken opponents who attacked them. - DraskelClan1mthCommented
negotiators aren't messengers.
"Who in their right mind kills the messengers? Only crazed fanatics!" - DraskelClan3mthCommented
or write it into the story. Stop using the authors notes to explain what you should be explaining in the narrative. Never use foot notes or asides to explain core information. I'm seriously questioning your understanding of creative writing. Maybe take some classes to better understand why some of your decisions are completely wrong. No editor would ever accept this.
'However, if I were to use a high-tier grade two 'foundation establishment liquid,' I should be able to cut this time by half. However, that would still be too slow since only half a year is left until the inter-academy competition.' His head hurt thinking this, and he realized that no matter if one had some advantage or not, it wasn't easy to become strong. (A/N: See author's note.) - DraskelClan3mthCommented
Yes! No matter the circumstances all Rapists are trash. would have been an instantaneous drop from me if you made the MC a rapist.
However, he shook his head and coldly said, "No, and I don't want you to suggest this to me ever again, understand?" Although he needed a large number of LPs, he wasn't a rapist and had his morals. - DraskelClan3mthCommented
tactically stupid. how will you hear any alerts from the guard now?
She was surprised by his question as he hadn't expected this to be his first question. She stopped being nervous and smiled "Yes. That's why I set it up." - DraskelClan3mthCommented
nah. more like "most male authors can't write believable female characters because they've never spoken with one". Seriously, in what manner did the Haory/Hoary ever indicate she thought Max was a bad guy in their previous fight? This feels utterly shoehorned in for absolutely no believable reason.
If Max could hear her thoughts now, he would be speechless and only one thought would come to his mind 'Women are strange creatures. That can't be understood by men'. - DraskelClan3mthCommented
advice: never reveal story information in side notes. This type of information should always be revealed in the narrative. Any other way is a failure on the part of the author.
*The title *Hannah* is the name of Max's mother. - DraskelClan3mthCommented
pretty sure he just literally "raised" his father's death flag on this 3-star hunt. I'm guessing an undisclosed nobles betrayal. one that wanted Max's mother and is thinking "she'd still be alive if she chose me...."
Max stood there looking at her swaying back in a trance, breathing her lingering scent. He then murmured in a low voice "That's one strange woman." - DraskelClan3mthCommented
while somewhat humorous, unless this is being written by a 12 year old the word "Undies" should never be written by a serious author.
After teasing her for a while, He put his right hand under her gown and undies to explore her sacred area. - DraskelClan3mthReplied to 4pmbookstack
Harems in primitive and ancient societies aren't typically formed just because of strength. The reason there aren't many instances of Female centric polygamy is because a woman can only get pregnant once at a time, whereas men can get multiple women pregnant at the same time, greatly increasing population and therefore usable resources for expansion.
Unlike on Earth, In this world population of women is many times more than men. This is because women are more gifted in sensing Mana and Many powerful mages are women. - DraskelClan3mthReplied to brucelee5638
Because Spirit Cultivation is popular. So far this feels like SC stripped down temu edition.
When Max turned 12, he found out that he didn't have any talent, which caused him to fall into depression because without magic talent, there is no chance that you can become a mage and if one isn't a mage, he or she is basically useless in this world. - DraskelClan3mthCommented
"shoot it"?
'Well, shoot it. I'm still alive. This is what matters.' Thinking this, he threw all the puzzling thoughts to the back on his mind and slowly got up from the bed. - DraskelClan4mthCommented
how? you're telling me that Artoria Pendragon was not ever the leader of Avalon? This makes no sense.
Though she initially took part in the Pandemonium Gift Game to restore the honor of her Community, Artorias couldn't ignore an evil right in front of her. Azi exuded an evil unlike anything she had ever sensed, so taking him out took priority over everything else. - DraskelClan4mthCommented
sorted -> sordid
Instead of taking offense to Vahn's standoffish response, Apollo adopted his most captivating smile and replied, "Not all of us, I'm afraid. My father has compelled my Great Aunt and many of my sister Goddesses to remain in private quarters for the duration of your stay. Your reputation, including your rather sorted history with women, proceeds you." - DraskelClan4mthReplied to _Felix_
thats a scene from the Norse God of War game.
Recognizing the phrase, Fenrir promptly snatched the card before placing it against her chest. She could always check it later. It was far more important to prevent others from doing the same. After all, while there were innumerable benefits to having your identity more clearly defined, it also made your weaknesses easier to exploit. A notable example of this was how the Norse God of Light, Baldr, was imperverious to harm. However, the moment he was exposed to mistletoe, he became as weak and vulnerable as a normal human male. (A/N: Fun fact. Many have speculated that this is the origin of Superman's weakness to kryptonite.) - DraskelClan4mthCommented
polyamory is legitimately possible. Vahn level polyamory is only possible with time-shenanigans and immortality.
As cheesy as it might sound, Izayoi genuinely believed that true love was something that could only be experienced between two people. He wasn't going to go out of his way to tell others how they should live. That was far too troublesome. If anything, he just felt sorry for Vahn, the girls involved with him, and any children they were unfortunate enough to produce. They might be happy, sure, but they would never be as happy as if they were a normal family... - DraskelClan4mthReplied to SnowmanOfEternity
yet all of this is incorrect. Vahn reaching the peak just means he has no more challenges for himself. the universe he creates from that foundation can have all the challenges his family wants it to have. I'd guess that he will ultimately exist as an overseer while interacting with his realm through the template avatars, simultaneously being all powerful while also being as weak as he needs to be to go on whatever adventures his loved ones want. Mordred wants to conquer a universe, Vahn goes with her in a tier 6 template. Astoria wants to rebuild the true Avalon, tier 5 template Vahn goes with her. Meanwhile The ultimate core of Vahn (like the platform) ultimately sits outside of it all, experiencing it all through his Actualization Innate.
(A/N: This isn't the actual fight, only the prelude to battle. For those who are annoyed by Ureko's behavior, please consider her age, character, and what a union with Vahn is supposed to represent. She is looking for a life partner, someone she could fight alongside and compete with. The notion that Vahn can simply surpass her whenever he wants, literally in the blink of an eye, would be pretty upsetting. Even worse is the fact that she, and the rest of his harem, are basically denied the same right. In other words, she is basically calling out Vahn for being a hypocrite and a control freak xD...) - DraskelClan5mthCommented
have you paid any attention Vahn? the moment you make the Fairy Tail Guild you would instantly have Wendy Marvell all over you from your Loli/Dragon Magnet Innate:SSSS
Unless he proactively altered their Templates in some way, it was virtually guaranteed that people like Natsu, Lucy, and even Lissanna would end up together. Grey and Luvia would almost certainly end up as a couple, and, though he had never really liked Jellal's character, the only other person Vahn could imagine Erza falling for is himself. This was the crux of the issue as it was very easy for him to imagine any attractive, interesting, or powerful female character falling for him.