Daoist_Wakanda
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How convenient 😀
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Humble brag
This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist_Wakanda3yrCommentedCh 238 Temporary Hiatus: Sick (8/21/20)
- Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to McjanjoCh 238 Temporary Hiatus: Sick (8/21/20)
- Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to ChainslockCh 1 He Who Was Given ANDROMEDA
- Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to Chainslock
Fair 😅😂😂😂
Ephraim laughed heartily as he watched his friends who are also his classmates—no, they were his colleagues now, chugging on beer. They were in an Izakaya—a Japanese pub; a rather larger one at that, rented by the President for its new batch of Archeology graduates. They were few in number, comprising of students that hadn't even reached 300 numbers. - Daoist_Wakanda3yrPosted
TL;DR : I'm too annoyed to even do a full review on this one. Thanks to author/TL team for making me cry. writing (5/5): good grammar, interesting dialogue, I love the way idioms are expressed. story (3/5): interesting premise, pacing was a little on the fast side but it was still good. technical elements were there (foreshadowing etc.) BUT the sudden forced plot armour 30ish chapters in killed the whole thing for me. unable to continue. characters (4/5): good, interesting, few small inconsistencies but acceptable . updates (2/5): for the standard of WN, at the time of writing, 1ch a week is not high. that being said for new readers there are many chapters to binge on. worldbuilding (3/5): good until chapter 30 when author disregards his own power system and plot armours his way to a solution that never needed to be there in the first place - yes I'm annoyed lol, its so hard to find a novel tthats interesting and has this level of english on WN
- Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to lenkite
because plot armour and it fuxks me off so badly because this story was shaping up to be a good one. but from here on out I cant get over this and how theyre gonna use this to power level MC. it was so unnecessary which is all the more annoying - why dont you just say god came down and gave him some cheat codes ⬆️↙️⬇️↘️↕️ sigh
Ch 31 Lord Jiang - Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to SerBlueom
sigh...
"You took ten Realm Opening Pills? Ten?!" His massive body rumbled as he laughed. "You swallowed half a kingdom's worth of treasure, used it to kill an Archmage, and lived to tell the tale? Well done! Well done indeed!" - Daoist_Wakanda3yrCommented
f*ck off lol, f*ck right offfff loooooooool I almost wanna drop this novel right now. f*cking REALLLY?! REALLY?!? WHY? JUST WHY? 😩😩😩😩😩😩 Author, was this necessary? did this have to happen? didnt they say they werent outting any resources into finding this kid? so why is he figbting archmages? thats like saying he could kill his master? allow it mannnnnnnnn. pissed off lol
"You took ten Realm Opening Pills? Ten?!" His massive body rumbled as he laughed. "You swallowed half a kingdom's worth of treasure, used it to kill an Archmage, and lived to tell the tale? Well done! Well done indeed!" - Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to Pirate_King_Ch 30 Power Overwhelming
- Daoist_Wakanda3yrCommented
Yeahhh this fight was a bit nonsensical still... youre going down the dragon ball z root which is boring. If all MC fights keep being like this I'm out. The whole set for this fight was really interesting but then you had to go and just plot armour your way out of it? He's fighting against a guy thats a f*cking grandmaster? and yet this grandmaster just stands there like he's playing a turn based game? Come on man, you're better than this. If this energy is strong enough to blow people up how the f*ck is he okay with it in his body? Sigh, so frustrating cus I've a gut feeling this is gonna happen loads.
Ch 30 Power Overwhelming - Daoist_Wakanda3yrCommented
meanwhile this stuff is in his body? is he made of adamantium?
Stormleaf staggered back several paces, but his two companions weren't as lucky. Both of them exploded in a shower of blood and gore, completely unable to resist the wave of Essence that came rushing at them. - Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to lordseven"You weren't talented enough?" Arran was baffled. "But your skill at magic is phenomenal!"
- Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to Shizhi
secondary effect, thats why his essence was increasing so fast, nothing to do with his talent.
A loud crash sounded, and a few dozen paces away from them, Arran saw a large tree being uprooted, ripped from the ground the way a farmer might yank weeds from a field. - Daoist_Wakanda3yrCommented
OH SNAPPPPPPPPP
"Because tomorrow," Master Zhao said, "I will leave." - Daoist_Wakanda3yrReplied to Anubesetesh
dont forget his forbidden realm 🤣🤣🤣
Master Zhao sighed. "Truth be told, until now, I had some doubts about you. Other than your forbidden Realm, you're not exceptionally talented. Don't misunderstand me — you have some talent for magic and swordsmanship, but it's nothing out of the ordinary." - Daoist_Wakanda3yrCommented
oh stfu lol
"But they came here for me," Arran said.