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The main tent was where Elder Falcon convened a war meeting with some of the commanders. "According to our intel, the first city is located here," he gestured to a location on a map that was laid out before them."The city is called Westwatch, it is their first line of defence, but in all honesty their strength is not something worth considering. We shall strike there first and slowly progress to the capital in a straight line. When we have captured the capital then and only then will we take control of the rest of the outer regions cities. These battles shas to be swift and decisive, we need to meet the naval commander armies, led by Elder Azure in the kingdom of Umbris. The naval commanders are not that strong on land and they will need our assistance. Thus we shall rest for 3 days and march with full speed."- wayne00001mthReplied to KnightmaresCh 159 The Assassin's Plans & Elder Azure Completes His Mission
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and (here) I thought
"Ha! Who would have thought?" Cinder lamented, " A king in charge of a small kingdom had already reached such a stage that we can't contend against him, and her i thought we could easily kill him." - wayne00001mthCommented
*on what it (could) possible be*
When Elder Dragon heard the reports come in, he could not help but grow solemn; there was something that was not right. He had a feeling that something was out of place, but he could not place his finger on what it possibly could be. - wayne00001mthCommentedCh 151 The Black Flames and the City's Condition
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without the city without permission?. the city without permission?
This paragraph has been deleted. - wayne00002mthCommentedCh 146 History of the Continent and the Leading War Parties
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did all of the unite? or did all of them unite?
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it thought? or I thought
"Thus, I felt that since our relationship has improved many folds over the course of the last few years, that I could visit and see if you have more information to this whole situation than I." he added, "And the reason for you specifically coming to us, is not only due to our friendship, correct?" the old man countered in reply. Ethan nodded before speaking, "I had a feeling that you were by far stronger than what you seemed to be showing on the surface, and it thought to try my luck" he admitted. - wayne00002mthCommented
no excuse me? or now excuse me?
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(repeated text?)
The Elder Dragon, his gaze steady as a hawk's, nodded, "Good. Remember, shadows can hide both allies and vipers. Trust no one but watch everyone." - wayne00003mthCommented
teh (the)
"Lord Elder" one of the younger knights spoke, "And what if the item is to be in the hands of teh so-called chancellor? Surely, we are not to fight a man above our own strength? Considering that they are a Tier 2 Kingdom their top combat strengths is to be stronger than ours, no?" He posed a valid question. - wayne00004mthReplied to zizi_wiwiCh 114 Reactions and the Start of a Journey
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bothe* (both)?
"My Lord, none of the boats alone could carry all of us, which vessels should be taken then?" Elder Falcon advised. "Bothe two Oceanic Orca's remaining and all 10 Maritime Caracks would be sent out. The fleet would be headed by Elder Dragon, and he will be accompanied by Elder Dawn and Elder Falcon." he calmly stated. - wayne00004mthCommented
during the knight? or night?
Elder Azure did not trust sleeping in any other place than the boat. Anything could happen during the knight. This place was roaming with cutthroats, robbers, and murderers. No place was safe here. - wayne00004mthCommentedCh 100 Prince of Luminor and Trouble at the Banquet
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also disappeared into (the) shadow
The only knights that needed to be added to this line-up were the Guardian Knights, as they had other responsibilities and disappeared into shadow. - wayne00004mthReplied to wayne0000
or did'nt
The only knights that needed to be added to this line-up were the Guardian Knights, as they had other responsibilities and disappeared into shadow. - wayne00004mthCommented
the only knights that (did not) needed to be lined up*
The only knights that needed to be added to this line-up were the Guardian Knights, as they had other responsibilities and disappeared into shadow.