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PaperCrow4dCommentedCh 26 Chapter 26: Creditor- PaperCrow5dCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: A Surprise
- PaperCrow6dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: It's Cheap
- PaperCrow1mthCommented
hope you get it complete ssoon. also really enjoying your story so far I hope to see more chapters soon😣
As of now, I have re-written Bastion and Illumi's duel 5 F***ing times! - PaperCrow2mthReplied to Daoist60kqgH
its Actually Satan the Actually is important I think
"Do you have any imagination at all?" I sighed. "You can make swords with esoteric effects and you're settling for….being faster? Am I understanding that right?" - PaperCrow2mthCommentedCh 17 Chapter 17: The Basics of Onmyodo
- PaperCrow2mthReplied to Voltic_Ranger
lol before i knew how it was pronounced thats how i said it lol
"Trained him for a little while. Never liked the little shit, but Indra told me to." He shrugged again. "Had Bikou spar with him a few times, always spouting that crap about human supremacy. Got nothin against humans, but it gets really annoying after awhile." - PaperCrow3mthCommented
as the other peeps have said the story's got a happy medium of palaces and slice of life and the pacing is pretty good aswell imo. a suggestion from me maybe include some interludes of other peoples reactions to rens/the thieves actions i usually enjoy those in other stories though just a thought.
(Also, as we approach chapter 50, with nearly 100k words written, I have to ask: How's the story so far? What do we need to improve? Is the pacing good? Is there a good split between Metaverse and real life? - PaperCrow3mthCommentedCh 186 A Metting At The Barrier.
- PaperCrow4mthCommentedCh 6 The Unexpected Exam.
- PaperCrow4mthCommentedCh 5 Curious Anomoly.
- PaperCrow5mthCommentedCh 2 Great Start In the Academy!
- PaperCrow5mthCommentedCh 1 Welcome To Duel Academy!
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- PaperCrow6mthCommentedCh 35 Shadi Vs Ryze? An Anomaly?
- PaperCrow7mthCommented
Sun or maybe Storm. those are my guesses
So in the next chapter, Hayato will begin his training with the Dying Will Flames.. With which of the Flames do you think he will start with? Leave a comment with your thoughts. - PaperCrow7mthCommented
Great chapter thank you author person!!!!!
This book has been deleted. - PaperCrow7mthCommented
Ahh always satisfying to clear a board and murder someone th same turn with first darklord[img=update]
A one turn kill, something that even shocked him when he found the combo before the tournament. - PaperCrow7mthCommentedThis book has been deleted.
- PaperCrow7mthReplied to WaltzWannaWrite
ya didnt think this comment would get as much attention as it did figured maybe 50 tops
Probably the person who is trash talking behind the keyboard online about how a child should be a cold-blooded killer with the courage to enter the hell itself and piss on satan.