Looking forward to your next chapters

Wow literally a copy and paste , to be frank it’s terrible and needs a lot of editing or a rewrite

Good going so far and hope you finish the fanfic , good writing , can you increase the chapters per week ?

Needs editing gymnastics =Ninjitsu

Haku and Karin

Cosmog

This is a Really good pokemon fanfic I have read , it’s been a while since I came across a good one , do u have a favorite Pokemon fanfic

I will be honest the fanfic is well written but the whole movie arc went for too long , thank you for the fanfic really enjoyed it

Like the fanfic and your writing , keep up the good work

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Try Grammarly , it will help with proof reading and editing the sentences it helped me a lot with more complicated stuff like research papers

Terrible translation and really bad editing

Thank you for the chapter ,

*first men

Really terrible language skills , definitely need to be re edited and revised

*The Red Keep

*Emma Arryn

*Alicent Hightower

You will need to update the novel on daily basis if you are serious about it , it’s ok to make mistakes and you can fix it with a re write 🙂

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