Not going to lie, this story came out of nowhere. I enjoyed the environment the MC isn't your average edge lord, but he isn't completely sane either. A fun read so far can't wait to see where it goes.
Cursed Candy Craver | Reincarnated Into A Dead Kid’s Food Power System
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Not that it would matter for the two of them. Not many Kepler women were as short as Nico, and not many civilian men were as broad-shouldered and blonde as Max, thanks to the military grabbing everyone with half-decent system compatibility. There were sure to be more blonde men, some of them bleached blonde, but Max wasn't an easy person to miss in a crowd.
This is easily a hidden gem, if you like the video game genre this is a fresh take on it. Having the mc aim to become a pro, the game's world, the game not being a vrmmo. Everything just makes me a fan, pls continue posting
Is magician like the captain or is it a class, since both nimin and yuuno were melee classes at one point
One of the few Footsoldier Pro players, Yuuno was the only one who played the spear Variant. An incredibly skilled player, but all long standing Pros are. Nimin recalled some of the matches he had with Yuuno, and realized the the score was currently even. The Phaseblade was often put in an awkward spot when going against the spear Variant. Due to the Footsoldier's stabs with the spear.
As a writer this story makes me want to do better. The first few prologue chapters, though slow immediately hooks you giving the story a certain ambiance. an immediate addition to my collection.
I like the concept of the book and the characters interactions with each other. Though the dialogue is a bit cookie cutter or awkward at times. That really isn't a detriment to the book so far, I'm excited to see where this relationship goes.
In all it's a well written story. I think the strong point of the book is the pacing and world building. It's honestly a fun read too, keep going author.
The story in total is pretty good, ever since I picked it up I can't wait until it gets updated. The only thing is I would like longer chapters so more of the story could be developed, but since it's just the beginning I bet that it'll get better as the author keeps writing.
Ves' character development is weird, it feels like he's going forward by moving backward. Like before he had to remove his conscience but now, it's slowly returning. Tainted but returning