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    (I have read about 150chapters) 1).In my opinion if you ever read doulou dalu series ( soul land) it is for the best that you stay away from this novel. It this similarity that originally that got me reading this novel and makes me realize how structure weak this novel. I found myself realizing things such as soul rings and spirit levels, spiritual aptitude were not really properly explained in the beginning; which is were you build the setting in any novel. Take for example example it would randomly mention some on is level 30 which in soul land would be a peak grand spirit master(it goes from 1-100 in increments of ten);however in this novel that structure is not explained . 2)Overall reading this novel was a slog, it feels like the constantly explaining something rather than exploring. Within in 150 chapters there already 2 tournaments which in my opinion is were novels pace basically come to a stall, which in this case was only a gimmick to hand out gifts to the mc. 3)The character development is severally lacking , while none of the characters are annoying per say they all come out as flat. The mc is pretty much a non arrogant Mary Sue. His whole reincarnate status basically allows him to now how to do everything and know everything which basically comes off as feeling unnatural as this depth to the character was not developed. This same principle worked in soul land as this reincarnation knowledge was a). was limited to a sect techniques and b). was gradually integrated into the world.

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