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Kwarlis

Kwarlis

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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis1d
    Commented

    This story went off a cliff. the last 10 or 15 chapters make no sense. ugh.

    Ch 489 The Final Chapter
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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
    Urban · A Small Purple Umbrella
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis1d
    Commented

    dafuq is even happening anymore.

    Ch 478 I Will Settle It Myself
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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
    Urban · A Small Purple Umbrella
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis1d
    Commented

    Seriously, dafuq? what about literally the first 80% of the story?

    Ch 476 Farewell
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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis2d
    Replied to Avan

    I've caught up on the story completely now. the writing style still has some of those frustrating moments that I mentioned in the 1600-1800 chapter range I mentioned, but they are much fewer and further between. I find myself reconnecting with the feeling of pure enjoyment I got from the first 1500 chapters. I'm looking forward to seeing how this new academy arc progresses! I hope my words don't come across as mean or overly critical. I'm a big fan of the story and what you've got going on here, and thought it would be helpful to point out how I felt about it. As a side note, ever since the light/dark duality of Emery's wolf bloodline came to light, I always saw Klea as the representation of the light, and Silva a representation of the night. I'm not sure why, or even if that was the intention, nor do I know how Morgana and Gwen fit into that, so it's more of a half-baked idea, but I do hope that Silva graces the story again with her presence one day.

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    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis5d
    Posted

    Currently at chapter 1826. I'll start off with a critique so it's not lost in the review. Starting around chapter 1586, Final Request, the writing style took a turn for the worse in my opinion. It's honestly hard for me to keep reading, even though I love the story that was built up in the first 1500 chapters. I don't know if that change is a translation thing, or if the author writes in English and just changed his style. Either way, I'm not a big fan of the change, which overemphasizes trivial things and feels like it's just drawing out the word count. I find myself skimming through multiple paragraphs of fluff just to get to meaningful moments, and it reminds me of the annoyance of an unskippable YouTube ad. The intimate moments in the story were much more robust earlier on, but they are very minimized at the same time this writing style change happens, which is a big negative in my opinion. It's much harder to feel the emotional connection in the writing, and characters are starting to feel much more detached. That said, the first 1500 or so chapters are top shelf. Really good writing, interesting story, engaging characters, and moments of importance that have real weight to them are present all throughout these chapters, and it leads to a very satisfying reading experience. I would definitely recommend, but be warned about the style changes later on as it may dampen enjoyment, as it has mine.

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    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis12d
    Commented

    second time author got hers wrong .

    [Shannon's Affection: 55/100]
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    Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
    Urban · Zentmeister
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis1mth
    Commented

    I mean... you killed 10 criminals to shatter your old way of thinking so...

    Can you make sure that after a million years, you are the same person? Can the people who knew you in the beginning still recognize who you are? Can you look yourself in the mirror and say without hesitation that you did nothing against your conscience? And if you did change, is it too late to rectify your mistakes?
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    Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
    Eastern · LazySageDao
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis1mth
    Replied to Picki

    Probably. Someone in the novel's discord claiming to be author's friend has said the author won't be writing anymore. It's not the author himself, so take that for what it is. But almost a month of no chapters lends credibility to that.

    Ch 1135 A Gruesome Battle
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    Ascension of the Immortal Asura
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis2mth
    Commented

    Doesn't that... defeat the purpose of having a library, and one with restricted access no less?

    'Well, if no one has used it for hundreds of years, it's uselessly sitting here collecting dust. I'll keep it for now. Who knows, maybe I'll get lucky enough to run into someone who can read this language.'
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    Ascension of the Immortal Asura
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis2mth
    Commented

    Panqa grabbed Panqa?

    Panqa blinked, but eventually, she understood as she lifted Panqa by the shoulder and brought her to Davis, allowing her to be held by him from behind. Lanqua's bosoms were pressed but escaped to the sides when Davis's arms wrapped around her lithe body.
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis2mth
    Commented

    fiancée*

    "I guess, you're right. Still, I can't wait for this war to end. I have a fiancé back home waiting for my return. I can't wait to marry her and settle down."
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    Dragon Monarch System
    Urban · Dark_Bangali
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis2mth
    Replied to Kwarlis

    lol, read the very next paragraph and that was answered. well played.

    [HP 50/50]
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    Martial Arts System
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis2mth
    Commented

    HP was 15. With 5 pills that add 5 HP each, it should be 40. Did I miss something?

    [HP 50/50]
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    Martial Arts System
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis3mth
    Commented

    What? This sentence makes no sense.

    Tyrion thought for a moment and said, "I need good Sabein as in good with the blade, I also need shooting weapon, anloght weight armor, and firearms."
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    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis3mth
    Commented

    You know, even though Groode already called him by name a few chapters ago...

     Tyrion was speechless. His intention was to conceal his real identity. He had not expected for Groode and the others to perfect his plan. However, Tyrion did not wish to clarify the facts, but simply left them to continue their guessing
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    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis3mth
    Commented

    Why does the pharmacist know his name if Tyrion is under cover and wearing a mask...

    "Mr. Tyrion, your serum has great significance, as it can create more evolved beings for humankind! You shall become a great man for humankind!" Groode said, full of joy.
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    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis4mth
    Commented

    What? so you just... make the last 400 chapters useless? Is this even the same family?

    Ch 428 Life Officially Restarts
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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis6mth
    Commented

    It's unfortunate to see it end like this with so many unanswered questions.

    Ch 483 With Isabel (End)
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    Returning From The Magic World
    Urban · Dark_Crow1111
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis6mth
    Commented

    Arthur

    "Come on," she said in a soft voice, inviting Ciel to play the main game.
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    Returning From The Magic World
    Urban · Dark_Crow1111
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  • Kwarlis
    Kwarlis7mth
    Commented

    ... dafuq?

    Ch 474 Breakthrough
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    Returning From The Magic World
    Urban · Dark_Crow1111
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