oh cool a worm fan fic. im gona place this in my library to read for later. im only on chapter 200ish for worm. I wana finish that before jumping into a fanfic to avoid spoilers. im looking forward to this.

even though yout posted new chapters a mounth ago and I only now found out I hope life is treating you well. I may not be reading the new chapters untill a few more are released but here are my stones for a few days.

its alive, its alive

ok im glad im not the only one who saw the patferns. well played author well played.

I honistly write very few reviews. The premise of this story is quite good. However the downsides to reading this overweigh the ups. Each chapter is VERY small, at the end of each chapter theirs an authors note pushing to his patreon. Withing the first 20 chapters or so 90% of them are just telling the audiance to fork over power stones for a new chapter, then the chapter right after that asked for even more. It's like getting back to back unskippable ads on youtube.

I have about 200 books or more in my library and most of them I put on hold for more chapters and read like 200 chapters at a time. then leave my powers tones and put it back on hold. I love this fan fic so far keep it up.

I love this. Thanks for sharing.

I want him to mess up because of shaky hands or like extream pain and buy something entirely useless but funny like professional jazz hands

murder hobo Rebecca all the way

holy... yea im gona right a review. im bad at math.

I am writing this as I have read up to the curently chapter 14. The author is writing two books right now and I love both of them. This story so far is quite interesting. Not only is the story development there, but character development as well. it is slightly on the slow side but that is for story progression rather than geting to the point. With that said I would recomend reading to chapter 20 before making a decision. as ch1-12 are about the world and character wheres ch13+ seams like its gona expand on the authors consept.

oh well you actualy changed the format. thanks. also thanks for the chapter

or was it ___ the one you use to seperate transitions love not look... fat finger text...

hey look the book continue the great work. if I could make a tiny suggestion. I listen to this using the tts function. if posible can you minimize this to only three in a line. --- as the tts reads them individual for like 1min streaght. if not thats fine to

thanks for keeping the old story im gona catch up on the last few chapters then read the new stuff you got planed. you done a good job so far keep up the good work.

I really like the consept for this book. The story so far is excelent. However the author just stoped. I dont know if its because of the upcoming holidays or something else. As it stand im going to place this book on hold and come back to it when 40 more chapters are released. The premis so far from chapter 1-40 is very similer to deteoit becoing human. However the author threw in some curve balls with a strange plant im looking forwered to seeing how it turns out.

BACK TO MONKAY!!!

lol have her pick up a black kat off the streets and keep it as a pet

i dont usualy write comments spoiler . . . . . . . . did you really just batman backstory us hahaha

Q_Q Man this was a good book. however I found out that when you cant access the authors profile to search for other books or information. It usualy means webnovels hard droped the author/translator and they have no acess to the webnovel site/wont be coming back. if anyone knows anything please reply to this to let others know eather what happened to the author or where the book might have transfered to.