Should that say classmates instead of teammates?

what? so he has a different quirk then

that's stupid. if he can summon them and they aren't always there then shota should be able to seal them.

+1

no

Hey not trying to tell you how to right your story but you could probably take out the attack speeds since they are in virtual reality. loving the story so far. keep up the good work. [img=More pls]

yea so far the story is going pretty good so far. hope you keep up with it .

comma is in the wrong space.

Is it just me or does this sound very similar to pokemon?

THX

take your time.

what was the point of him going with them if it's just going to follow cannon.

I like the story so far. It's a lot different than what I usually find on this sight. One of the only problems is that you have multiple words pressed together where it looks like your space bar messed up and stopped working for a second.

most cultivating stories I read has the main character use a spear.

thx

mystic zoan greek god hermes

where he get thunder power