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You repeat limited points like a parrot are you illiterate and do not know what the definition of “free” is?
Ivy digging her grave hole deeper, the life dept isn't being acknowledged and could be ignored, her digging is actively detrimental how can someone claim a life dept they actively deny and pretend doesn't exist, creating problems for your self. trying to get Quinn to acknowledge it is like asking to be shackled around the throat. do you have to honour a money dept when the whole world doesn't want the dept to be repaid or its existence acknowledged. Imagine the bank deleted 1st , 2nd & 3rd party information-everything to do with a money transaction in your favour and 10 years later tried to claim you owed them money, how is that different making it up?
If you’re so adamant that the mc who has more spiritual power than the nine tales didn’t lose in this clash you should be obligated to write Izumi constantly sneak attacking the mc and soul and mind raping her like an all you can eat buffet. You opened the floodgates with how hard she lost in the conflict
Some one invades your soul ripping all your memories stealing everything you know, you know nothing about fighting as a soul they do. You fight back and are having a terrible time fighting this single soul entity off, it splits into a thousand copy’s all whom are still stealing your soul energy and hundreds escape all with your soul energy and memories. You should read the chapter with cold logic, you created an overpowered enemy out of nowhere did your main character get to strong and you ran out of ideas?
Don’t waste time everything about the mc is erased halfway through the story im not tagging this spoiler since this is a deal breaker for the main audience of people poking their heads in to look at a REINCARNATED CHARACTER USING FUTURE KNOWLEDGE. Massive plot hole incoming too they ripped all the memories and spiritual energy out of the mc, I didn’t waste time reading further but if the mc isn’t anything but living and having the conversations of middle school handicapped child the writer really lost their marbles.
This fic will be trash negative -10/10 if you keep introducing terrible gods, that don’t have the resolution of getting the vlad the impaler treatment as their comeuppance. You reap what you sow. Acting like this guy can’t exterminate them all in their future instead of being neutral is insanity regardless of the transmigration cheats.
Outing yourself as someone who has read barely any Chinese cultivation stories.
Dropped here twice was real bad.
I skipped here after dropping twice in the 400’s your biggest sin in this entire book was putting a shackle around your neck when you avoid power like it has HIV. sit down and put thought into a better story that accommodates a more powerful mc without making stupid justifications for the enemy being stronger for no real point apart from I need a challenger powerful mc’s we all know the mc will win it’s grating and irritating when you throw them through artificial problems of their own lapse of judgement which shouldn’t have happened if the philosophy of getting stronger every story of this nature seems throw out the window when they can’t accommodate.
This is one of the most prominent examples of the writer being scared of making their main character powerful they just stick a hook up his nose and lobotomise him when decisions that affect his personal power and nothing else in the story are put in front of him. The writer also likes to make the mc a door mat 75% of the time so it’s an annoying slog to wade through. I’ve read into the chp400’s twice before writing this since I forgot why I dropped it, where he dies and and has his soul taken by a daedric prince and thrown around many scene changes like a rag doll since he committed assisted suicide. don’t read if you hate weak mc’s cause the writer can’t be creative.
Isn’t the grail corrupted ? I’m not following what he gets out of this…
Last chapter had me knowing this story is going downhill, couldn’t even last 1 chapter before falling to the bottom of the barrel
It’s easy to read for English readers who don’t really require commas and the like, the words used are advanced so people complaining are probably not native speakers or are pea brains who require such things to understand intended meaning. this is 1000% more palatable than the Chinese Mtl garbage that usually gets posted.