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LoneDao

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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao12d
    Commented

    We’re the chapters reuploaded as mtl cause I remember the ones from four years ago reading better

    Ch 1 001, [There's Something Wrong With This Account]
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    There's Something Wrong With This Account
    Games · Kindergarten Expert
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao23d
    Replied to TheWanderingHermit

    Yea I left a similar review and comments but I think they don’t show up for others except a comment I left on a review

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    Legend of The Young Master
    Eastern · Nobelnerd
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao24d
    Replied to Jack_Priper

    Jianghu can refer to martial arts world too so it still applies to a low fantasy world

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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let me laugh
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao26d
    Commented

    My guy finally got a long distance teleportation skill, that guy with the eyes from heavenly law or whatever even had one.

    Ch 1063 Great Void Merging and Void Turning
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    Realm of Myths and Legends
    Games · DaoistZenFeng
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao27d
    Commented

    Bro watched a few episodes of Naruto and there was no pulling him back

    [Heaven tried to keep me down, but I defied it! Brown boring eyes? With this technique, I can change my eye color and become the mightiest eye model! Muhahahaha!] 
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    Library of Heaven's Souls
    Fantasy · ClasslessAscension
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao27d
    Commented

    Lohp was fun at first but got repetitive fast, looking forward to where this goes and hope u don’t fall into the same pitfalls

    [Congratulations! Unlocked Library of Heaven's Souls!] 
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    Library of Heaven's Souls
    Fantasy · ClasslessAscension
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao27d
    Replied to Potaty

    The start of this novel blatantly plagiarizes Robbin Hobbs assassins apprentice. Frankly I don’t feel comfortable reading this due to that. I don’t know if later chapters will plagiarize from assassins apprentice or other novels but I’d rather not read this due to the fact it’s a real possibility considering everything from the grandfather dropping him off to character interactions within those first 8 chapters was beat for beat ripped off with very minor changes to fit the world setting.

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    Legend of The Young Master
    Eastern · Nobelnerd
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao28d
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    The start of this novel blatantly plagiarizes Robbin Hobbs assassins apprentice. Frankly I don’t feel comfortable reading this due to that. I don’t know if later chapters will plagiarize from assassins apprentice or other novels but I’d rather not read this due to the fact it’s a real possibility considering everything from the grandfather dropping him off to character interactions within those first 8 chapters was beat for beat ripped off with very minor changes to fit the world setting.

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    Legend of The Young Master
    Eastern · Nobelnerd
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao28d
    Commented

    I’m sorry this is blatant plagiarism man, u just changed some minor details to match ur cultivation world. The guy with the limp, the grabbing his chin and staring at his face. Taking him to the barn. The line about the dragons is the same line but it was hawks. All the character interactions in this chapter were ripped off from assassins apprentice.

    Ch 7 Had Enough to Eat?
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    Legend of The Young Master
    Eastern · Nobelnerd
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao28d
    Commented

    Okay this interaction is like beat for beat the start of robin hobbs assassin’s apprentice dude.

    Ch 6 Your Responsibility Now
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    Legend of The Young Master
    Eastern · Nobelnerd
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao28d
    Commented

    This reminded me of the beginning of a novel I read not long ago, assassins apprentice

    Ch 5 Whose Child?
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    Legend of The Young Master
    Eastern · Nobelnerd
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    I thought at the peak of their worlds cycle they were at the top of the universe, does that mean nobody in their universe had actually reached the limit of it cultivation realms yet?

    "When the latest apocalypse descended, I was imbued with all their powers as they bid their final goodbyes. Their power allowed me to ascend beyond the Half-Celestial realm and become a Greater Celestial, which is more than 3 major realms higher and near the very peak of power achievable in our universe."
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    Immortal Simulation
    Eastern · Kotario
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    Rouge system alert, multiverse system apocalypse imminent. Defiance of the fall world like a word with u.

    [Objective: Attract players from Terra and solidify the connection to it, providing grounds for the system's invasion and eventual takeover!]
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    Immortal Simulation
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    So close lol

    [However, player Dalvin is too weak! As such, the system deems it best to make him a puppet leader while the system controls its own functions freely!]
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    Immortal Simulation
    Eastern · Kotario
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    Are we gonna see an enemy becomes an ally trope here, that could be interesting

    As Jean materialized back in the college, he remained composed, his mind focused on the task at hand. With a determined stance, he whispered to himself, "But I love my future more."
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    I Refused To Be Reincarnated
    Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    Curious how many destroyed paths we have here, 1 for each academy or more?

    His emotions were a mess, as he suspected this world's magus to regulate everything from the shadows. Since Elena lived for centuries, it wasn't too unrealistic to expect he could live much longer. Especially if he was really destroying paths and plundering their knowledge.
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    I Refused To Be Reincarnated
    Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    Doesn’t that mean the current archmages are in on it

    Adam's eyes narrowed. Between Kwame's and Elena's warnings, he was now sure the academy's magic path was flawed. Worse, it was made this way purposefully. After all, the common point between the two archmages was their absence of affinity and talent!
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    I Refused To Be Reincarnated
    Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    Bros building a body lol

    'What am I supposed to do with those materials?' He asked himself with a deep frown. After all, it was already his third mythical ingredient. Should he try to ask someone to craft items for him? But to what end? If they weren't soul-bound, they would be of little use...
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    I Refused To Be Reincarnated
    Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    System creator, part of the person or group of people destroying paths?

    Note: Soul is heavily damaged. Please progress using the proper paths...
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    I Refused To Be Reincarnated
    Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
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  • LoneDao
    LoneDao1mth
    Commented

    kind of surprised I don’t know what the system sources it’s knowledge from, but I assumed it was some kind of akashic records Type deal tied to the world The fact doesn’t recognize this Method at all Even though the person who created it never got to spread it and then died apparently, it’s still a little surprising, But i I think it still has knowledge of destroyed paths, considering his class.

    [Error, Error, standard limit broken.]
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    I Refused To Be Reincarnated
    Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
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