Daoist_Storm
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the seventh seat is ishiki not hayama
I don't know if it's just me but I feel the story has unnecessary actions and complications to try and make it more interesting. It feels Off. I can't articulate it well so my analogy will be its like watching a movie with a really dull start and anticipating the moment when it truly captures your attention but the moment though feels near isn't coming. the book is good but It lacks something I can't quite put my finger on.🤔
Li Kui is a fictional character in Water Margin, one of the Four Great Classical Novels in Chinese literature. Nicknamed "Black Whirlwind", he ranks 22nd among the 36 Heavenly Spirits.
U welcome 😄. when you have time pls rewrite it. i have read books sith the same "get a system after surviving an accident " books and they all try to make the MC as OP as possible. it just makes you try to explain how the MC'S ability is possible and makes the whole book boring. sure he can be slightly OP at the start but at least make the OPness more about skills and intellect than drastic physical changes that are noticeable. plus if u dont want him to stay in the hospital for long just make ur mc's injury some what light like a concussion and cracked ribs something that won't let him take more than a month to heal to avoid performing miracles in front of doctors who have his "b4 the system healed me" medical records. oh and the most important it does not matter how much MC'S love or trust someone. THE SYSTEM IS NEVER DISCLOSED TO ANYONE. if there is no choice buy an average ability from the system as say thats what u have but NEVER ADMIT THERE IS A SYSTEM TO ANYBODY. 😅✊🏾
Hmmm. I read up to chapter 15 and to br honest it was uncomfortable to read. so fast paced somewhat illogical and slightly childish. Its like getting an inspiration to create something wonderful like a sculpture then altering it due to narcissism.the idea of this book is really good but it somehow feels like a wish fulfillment novel. In my opinion it should be rewritten after researching and fleshing out the characters and the world background.