WillMissQ
I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks
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WillMissQ8hCommentedThe glazing is insane
He smiled softly before he responded. "Grumpy, but pretty cool. He's one of my favorite heroes."- WillMissQ8hCommented
There’s literally no reason to nerf Peter in mha and I can never understand why authors do it. There are plenty of people who can take what Peter dishes out at full strength with zero problems and there are others who are weak and would get one shot. So there’s no reason to nerf him at all. It’s so stupid.
Ch 2 Chapter 2: One Last Time II - WillMissQ15hCommented🚨Insert The Boys GIFs/PICs here - Most likes wins🚨(A/N: only TWO entries per person!)
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A homeless girl asked for help and you basically kicked her away smh
"Because you asked?" - WillMissQ1dCommented
Ah yes because last time you beat yourself up for not telling the doctors and now you completely ignore that feeling and hold back from telling her. Makes perfect sense.
Aaron gritted his teeth. As much as he wanted to assault her womb with his sperm, the imagery of the potential mess stayed his hand and his balls. In the past four days, he was able to train what dubbed his hypno cum to perfection. It was tough at the beginning but now he had a perfect handle on it. He just needed to clench his buttocks and the torrent of cum would stop. Simple as that. Of course, within all the heavenly intoxication, it wasn't an easy feat to do. Not to mention he had to do it without Cassandra's knowing, which was a difficult task in itself. Giving her the hypnotic suggestion to overlook his metahuman tendencies eventually solved his problems but, again, he felt terrible about it. He wanted to tell her but there was a chance the powers were temporary. Better to stay quiet than cause unnecessary worry. - WillMissQ2dCommentedCh 101 C101 Two Above All
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Another female to the Harem grindstone. we just finished securing another female and before you can even progress with her you decide to throw another one. It was first Padme, then Natasha, now Carol. You have a problem with trying to focus on one female at a time and grow that relationship and instead just slam women at him, one after another. Hell he’s not even dating anyone but you’re just throwing women at him.
Ch 100 C100 Project Pegasus - WillMissQ3dCommented🚨Insert Nickelodeon GIFs/PICs here - Most likes wins🚨(A/N: only TWO entries per person!)
- WillMissQ3dCommentedSeeing a few muggings going on Peter quickly knocked them out using his Venom Blast without anyone seeing him and called the cops. After doing this a couple more times, Peter managed to get ahold of some information by holding up a thug by his feet over a rooftop while thinking, "It worked for Batman."
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I don’t think you understand how economics works. The fantastic four and Tony Stark are the ones who are going to be making and producing the materials and then selling it. They should be taking a larger chunk of the profits because they are putting more into the product itself
Ch 6 Issue 6: Rumble in Hell's Kitchen Part I - WillMissQ4dReplied to Riger82_
The author will totally ignore this oversight because then he would have to actually go back and change things.
Danzo, for all his crimes, was not defenseless. He parried with seasoned precision, his own Sharingan granting him foresight that allowed him to counter the relentless assaults. - WillMissQ5dCommented
This isn’t even a cliffhanger since we know exactly what he’s about to say
He took a deep breath, wondering if he should tell them the truth. "After Mom died, I… I couldn't handle it so I ran away…" - WillMissQ6dCommented
“Where have you been all these years?” “I got abducted by a blue alien”
The room seemed to hold its breath as the family reunion took place, the weight of years of separation melting away in that moment. - WillMissQ10dCommented
This is so unnecessary because he knows force healing. I’m pretty sure.
Taking off his shirt, as he had nothing else to stop the bleeding, Peter revealed his chiseled chest. "This might hurt a little," he said as he tore a strip from his shirt to use as a makeshift bandage. - WillMissQ10dCommented
Not once did Peter ever call his sixth sense, his spider sense. Why would he call it that then?
After explaining a bit and the limits of their powers Shang Chi smiled before saying, "I can think of a few things to start teaching you, but first we begin with the basics. I especially look forward to training your…spider senses, I wonder what kinds of training methods I'll develop. This could even prove useful for me."