I am adding a note to myself that I think I will write this until the chapters of five hundred and more and will se what is going to happen from there.

Hi, people, this is my new book, if you liked my other books and know my style, I would say that this is better than most of them. Thank you.

If there is enough interest on this story still at this time. I may keep on writing it. Of course it depends on interest. If there is yeah, there will be clans and other things.

Thank you

I can call you a descriptive pro. the description of the novel are in point and it give the real a visual understand. Well done Author. I am not really in System genre but this story is engrossing and interesting. And I love the characters name.

I am trying to edit it slowly, hang in there.

Thank you, I think of writing this novel but have doubts if it is going to be read or not.

The story is good enough, there are some details are left out most likely intentionally by the author as he or she does not want to write Harry Potter again. It is a good read and goes strong.

I think it is good enough to be put on a collection, I believe with time and more chapters it will get more robust as a story. As these types of stories takes little bit of time to take off.

The fanfiction of a hunter x hunter is rare to be seen around so I will give five stars because of the effort of the author. The fanfiction of a hunter x hunter is rare to be seen around so I will give five stars because of the effort of the author. The fanfiction of a hunter x hunter is rare to be seen around so I will give five stars because of the effort of the author. The fanfiction of a hunter x hunter is rare to be seen around so I will give five stars because of the effort of the author. The fanfiction of a hunter x hunter is rare to be seen around so I will give five stars because of the effort of the author.

A nice slow story. But I believe with time and effort. It will be more of a good read. Nice work, congrats author Goldfear. A nice slow story. But I believe with time and effort. It will be more of a good read. Nice work, congrats author Goldfear.

Seems good enough, I believe with time and effort It will became more fruitful and powerful novel that can be read by everyone. It will became more fruitful and powerful novel that can be read by everyone.

No. Just making things right.

It goes to a good place this book that I can see without forcing my eyes. I believe with time and more chapters. It would better and more fleshed out.

Amazing novel! World background is amazing and the mc is amazing. Mc is very smart as to how far i've seen. Everything is fine, the only thing that needs some improving is the writing quality, there are some minor mistakes but thats fine. Keep up the great work, I'll give you 5 stars!

I will May you comment on the first chapters and tell me if you see any difference grammar-wise

I am still working on this novel but as you said the grammar is way too bad and it does not bring any kind of life sustaining income and I do not have funds to hire an editor and editing the story all over would cost me too much time. I am not sure

Realistic.

Interesting

Good enough.