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since they left the farm, they could easily try to fortify a farm, but again it is too high risk, maybe they can try to fortify a resort hotel, but again it might be overrun by zombies, the next is the walled city which i forgot the name alexandria i think. carl, rick group will find the farm empty it seems, unless they are dead here, since the zombies are similar to resident evil zombies
they don't have much*
you kinda ruin the story by giving him viltrumite blood, since mark even though he is a halfbreed is stronger than most viltrumites and how viltrumite dna works it overwrites the opposing dna once the user has age, still who knows what will happen now, since you literally open a can of worms or pandora's box by doing this
at the time it is called the fusion deck
i must have commented before it appeared for me
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pls put pictures of the cards instead via the comment function
just change brother to mentor or friend ,since brother makes it too chinese or add big to it to make it like gohan ni-san which is big bro gohan
because she was kidnapped, no matter what rhaegar apologist say, since if you want to be with a noble lady you need to ask her father's permission first
it is still a kidnapping, since Lyanna was not of age, and was taken without an of age male guardian, so it was not a lie, so a girl who is 14 goes with a 29 year old to elope is not kidnapping even in modern standards that is kidnapping, even in westorosi standards it is kidnapping, if Lyanna was of age and was announce throughout the whole of westoros, then it would be a lie, but it was not, and lyanna was missing, and rhaegar is the main suspect
the rebellion was built on mad aerys killing Lord RIckard stark and Brandon stark and declaring for the heads of Ned and Robert, this shows how poor the author's knowledge of asoiaf lore is right here
comparing this character to your pro-black character is like comparing happy go lucky almost generic smut base mc to a suicidal mc. which means even though this story is pro-green you are pro-black, since you added the sowing of the dragonseeds to this fic when the person who had the idea died , but still Rhaenrya scene was too short, she didnt really suffer, maybe for a moment or two, but not really
of the day , instead fo the day
the ending is the ending Corlys does not deserve he should be in fire and the 7 hells for allowing his kinsmen to suffer like Vaemond, still the lack of Velaryons trying to rebel against Corlys besides Vaemond shows the blacks in canon have plot armor, still i dislike this ending, unlike rhaenys who was a follower, Corlys was a leader, so his ending being exactly the same more or less to Rhaenys ruins this scene, but still Addam and Alyn who i think are at dragonstone, might die there
the si is either acting to make a scene, or you really did nerf him
the si should know about this, unless the author nerf his knowledge beforehand here, so i think he accounted for two noobs to joined a rusty veteran on a fat dragon
what is speedy new name hefe
the Mc is not great, since the author says one thing, but does another thing, which goes against his character building of the Mc, but everything else seems find, his mc is the only being ooc which is such a bad thing, but since this fic is one of the few Green side Si fics from the hundreds of pro black fics, so ill keep reading currently at chapter 7