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jase1yrReplied to PinkCultureShould be explained before this
I prepare a cup of cocoa and instruct the system to put the 2 drops of sleeping drug in it, then walk once again to her room, I knock on the door, and after getting permission, walk inside.- jase1yrPosted
Holly shit, how are you guys getting past chapter 1? It's like teenage angst combined with kindergarten level of grammar skills. Excessive sweating followed by horrible sentence structure, makes this a 2 star novel at best. I'm brought back to times I had the "pleasure" of reading machine translation.
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I don't really get it acting has muscle memory, gunsman has it. Martial art don't? Are you forcing a training ark here?
Note: Doesn't need to be trained.] - jase1yrCommented
Didn't acting skills come with inbuilt muscle memories? Why the difference? Just so we can see MC train?
Note: You'll still need to practice to catch up with the muscle memories.] - jase1yrCommented
I kind of dislike how little system is explored. We only now discover there is skill list for martial arts. We don't know what categories it does cover. Is being famous scientist enough for it to include math or physics knowledge? Can it give more skills like "driving nuclear submarine" or something? What are the prices for other things? Is there more to system than scripts and skills? Can it grant items? Without this explored, the system feels like capricious deus ex machina. That has just what it needs to to solve situation and then proceeds to lock up the buying chance for him. Why hasn't the MC invested in thousands of different little skills for cheap? 5000 for amateur rank skill is nothing for him. It just feels that for the impact it has on the story, the MC is constantly forgetting it exists and looks at it once a month
Ch 180 MHS - Chapter 178 - jase1yrReplied to Daoisttyy
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Her son, Charlie, was slowly becoming a football genius, and her daughter, little Mary, was slowly coming out of her shell, and she had taken up singing. She reminded herself that she had to attend her audition at her school next week. - jase1yrReplied to Andrew_Edwards_0410
This is real world for the people there. What can they accuse him of? Worst they could try is say that he has ghost writers.
As all this was going on and everyone was busy doing their parts, Will had gotten busy writing down the first Harry Potter book. As he had the whole series in his inventory, he had decided to write down every book slowly and publish one book at the gap of half a year and then another one after another half a year.